Bro can you add the song
The man who sold the world by midge urge

Like kakorat is just staring into space singling to himself

“he said I was his friend Which came as some surprise I spoke into his eyes I thought you died alone, a long long time ago
Oh no, not me I never lost control You're face to face With The Man Who Sold The World”

This would match the story a bit because kakorat did manipulate people like chichi and tien and pretty much the earth he Made them believe he was a goody two shoes but in reality he wasn’t

This is my honest opinion the story kinda lost its touch and the fact kakarot is trying to get gohan and chichi back is kinda stupid because they already hate him and would most likely betray him same thing with dr briefs litterly it would be smarter to kill dr briefs If that happens the rest of the rebels would fall and if they kill gohan and if they kill chichi bulma and gohan guess what There would be no more hope because trunks can’t do anything because he’s full human with no power boost Mai and bill are just human
I got an idea like when we hit the dragon ball super era kakorat should use the super dragon balls to revive everyone like everyone in the universe who died so he could have more challenges to face and more people to recruit
And there’s so many other universes
Another thing you should mix in gt and super together
And there’s still plenty of movie and baddies kakorat could make use of like the following movies world strongest tapian movie the broly movie the people from the bio broly movie you know the people that made the bio warriors
Thank you if you consider these ideas

Kakarot takes the Senzu Beans to Gero who begins cultivating them himself mwahahahahaha

Oh god Mai the murderous mercenary who when romance is brought up gets all squeamish before she gets what turned into a kid and grows up again twice?

He won't be able to do the dumb monkey trick?... yeah bad news it grows back.

Will admit thought Kakarot would end up with Yurin rather than Chi Chi

Scariest thought ever Karkarot/Goku with an Android 17/18 generation infinite energy core and a technique like Kawakami Momoyos instant regeneration powered by KI

Thank you very much, in this quarantine it is very entertaining for me to read this chapter, I hope you have good health and are calm.

Loved it but You need to give kakarot reinforcements maybe kakarot meets babady in the next chapter or 2 kakarot meets babidy and of course they both got common goals so they strike a partnership and babidy revives majin buu which would add extra firepower and have you recommended giving the soldiers some martial arts training to make them more effective and there’s still some movie villains that need to be recruited and I’m pretty sure are weaker by now except not broly because he’s a maniac so people like bojack and his crew Dr. Kochin from the worlds strongest movie and lord slug From his movie and Dr. Collie and his scientist the people that made bio androids from bio broly

Please update soon

Ihate chichi

Great story, but you need to streamline the story and you also need a beta to fix all the grammar, structure and pacing problems that are prevalent through the whole story.

Seven nation army by the white stripes we wanna get as military as possible with this story

Can you do some military marching like here’s my favorite one I left my home I think it be nice for the Saiyan army to march this please at least consider it
I left my home- to join the army
I left my home-to join the army
The day I left-my mama cried
She knew that I-would die at war
I left my wife-crying at the door
She knew that I-would die at war
I left my son-playing in the yard
I left my son-playing in the yard
Seeing daddy leave-made him cry so hard
He said that I-had become a man

And if your doing anything with the narcos Tuyo a good song