Are you okay, my guy? The first chapter was of much higher quality. While I love the premise, I would've trusted my brother enough to 'tell' about the time I at least'tried' life as a female. That unrealistic "feminine rage" thing about only punching that peeker six ways to Sunday when I would've had them bound and broken, and waiting for the police to arrive.

Great gaming site i love yor work man great keep it up /

thanks for sharing.

Buena historia me gustaría seguir leyéndola no la actualizar las pronto o si por cierto soy de ecuador

thanks

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im surprised akane is your favorite ranma girl despite her being so abusive to ranma(i admit i cant stand akane but different people have different opinions,and besides the abusive girl/guy characters in anime and manga always gets on my nerves,but then again all characters have their fans as well as haters,this is an awesome fic though)

ps:you can guess from my anonymous username that im a fan of fics with the gamer ability in them so keep up the good work and update this fic with a new chapter when you have the time to w

I like it.

Love the story can't wait for the next one

I'm mixed. So far I generally like things. There are bits that you missed putting in though. Like the Neko-ken and what actually happened with Ukyo. I could see him changing things so that the yatta was basically left with her so she'd just have a generic marriage promise without the dowry.

Um, does the 500% from dad (not from Genma) mean that Genma isn't their biological father?

I'm actually interested in where you take some of this. It was curious that he was even preparing for Saffron. If he had sidelined the entire springs trip/Amazon thing, Saffron and the Dragon Prince might never have made an appearance.

You seemed to actually like Akane. Shudders. O.k. if that's what floats your boat. I just never was into her or her type at all. She doesn't fit the tsundere mold. She isn't usually empathic enough to properly defend Ranma and empathize with what he is going through. Currently, I don't think she even thinks of Ranma as male. Oddly enough, Ranma should feel safer to her. She has issues with the male gender Hikaru being male should still set them off.

There were a few males in the series that she liked. that guy who lived in the springs and Ryoga. I'd actually like a real relationship/romance/friendship with her and whoever to be built.

Hikaru by being totally not interested in Akane would just drive her to attempt to catch him or his attention.

I've never really liked Shampoo either. I've read a few good fics where she was done well. Why isn't he trying to build Ranma the well balanced working harem? ;)

I've always like Nabiki or Kasumi pairings myself. You seem to have gone with the standard Kasumi setup. Sighs. I find it highly ironic that she calls anyone else boring. Kasumi has to be the most boring regular character in the entire series. Most of the fics where Kasumi is developed well involve her getting time alone or having a break and having her own mini adventure with Ranma. Which totally changes his outlook and opens her eyes a bit.

I just don't see anything like that happening here, but then again it is rather early. You might set her up with Dr. Tofu.

Nabiki is the Tendo with the most potential. Why? She is the one that regularly actually defeats Ranma through her own methods and such. Everyone else Ranma learns their methods/adapts and a week later can trounce them and not have to worry about their style anymore. He was never able to adapt to Nabiki. Though it isn't like he usually tries either.

It's far too early. I actually like to see your Hikaru take a sideline and just sit out many events with Nabiki. I feel sorry for Nabiki as she seems to have been the only Tendo sister that was actually looking forward/hoping for the match/pairing. She'd given up on local boys. They all were after her younger sister and just didn't find her attractive. The arrangement must have felt like a godsend to her. This is a stranger that doesn't know her that she has a chance with.

I'm wondering what you are going to do about Sora. He can't just make up stuff about her. I hate to say it, but it would be sort of funny if she was a moe loli and Nabiki just sort of gave him a look when she shows up. Nah, that would be funny for a single gag, but after that not really that interesting.

I'm interested in Sora and how she will be developed.

Oh, can I request Ryoga Hibiki somehow bringing in various cousins that are all now half dog folks all wanting to serve Hikaru?

Hikaru has mentioned torture or taking things to the extreme a tad too many times. I could see that sort of thing spooking Nabiki and her wanting to find out just how willing that he was to do that or if it was just mouthing off.

So will Nodoka show up earlier thanks to Hikaru? He is still uncursed and he and Ranma should have enough skills so that she'd agree that they are covered. Then again, Ranma doesn't have a solid girlfriend at the moment which would work against him.

Will he know different attacks from other series?

Not bad.

XD definitely did not want that as my name

Really good story though it will be Appreciated if you update more frequently :)