Okay, can we please stop with the condescending asshole adult in a child's body trope? This is the nth SI fic I've spotted this phenomenon and quite frankly, acting like a presumptuous stuck up to little children does not earn you cookies to your double digits stats. In fact, it's far more immature than the children you look down on.

Look into basic child psychology and refresh your memory of the last eon you spent around actual children. Good god.

This is great! Your awesome ~

I give up. This is a complex storyline that can't be solved with a quick talk, no fight and a sudden end IN ONE CHAPTER AND IN 2 Darn MINUTES!
Work on building the tension, build up to a scene like this and for goodness sake take into account how characters would realistically react!
Endeavour would jump up in the first instant she insulted him and push her out of the house. He also has a bunch of lawyers to cover him financially with the problems with his wife, after all he bought her from her damn family.
None of this scene makes sense realistically. None of it would actually happen because you skipped over a thousand problems and just fixed the problem with a one-dimensional talk and a character arch that makes no damn sense!

You got all the writing talent you ever need but this isn't something you don't build up to. Every problem was fixed instantly, without fail and the OC got given everything on a silver platter to do so while ALSO breaking the realism of how people would usually react and win just cause that's what you decided needed o happen. Don't jump over obstacles, show your characters overcome them. Give each character plenty of scene to show off their personalities that aren't related to the main story, just build apon them PLEASE. It feels so shallow atm :(

Loved the first 4 chapters to bits, excellent work!
Hate these shallow ones and I'm gonna skip over them to see if you change it up a bit, if not thanks for making my day with those first 4 and have a good one man!
You deserve it!
- Vort

Your starting to drop the ball. The writing is getting one-dimensional in this chapter with things like the dreams not making sense. while their conversations aren't realistic, in that it takes a lot of conversations and thoughts to change ones mind, not a few random crazed words from a little girl that finds the mother by accident for no reason at all. There better be some extra quick she has about seeing the future or something to explain the Deko visions and another quirk of her dream walking into nearby people she relates to... God it's hard to justify what you did with this chapter!
It's all falling apart in this chapter and not having as much effort put into really showing of realistic character interactions!
Your an amazing writer, you got a ton of talent and know how to do it right (as proved by the last 4 chapters. So don't you dare think you suck at writing, just pick up your game and make the character interactions more in depth and the storyline less random and more defined.

That's just my advice and review though,
Thanks for the read!
- Vort

By adding a character/changing a character you automatically change the timeline and events no matter what. You have now made your OC accept to change things. My question is will you only go half way with changing events, altering them slightly. Or will you make completely new events, scenes and storylines that take place at the same time as some unchanged canon ones and make this story awesome!
That or do it your own way which I look forward to reading about

Thanks for the read! Loved it!
- Vort

Comedy of mother screaming about heart attacks check
Promise of staying canon while readers hope she'll go off canon check
Training like hell check
Thus determined to make the most of this life check

The greatest thing I've read in the history of MHA fanfiction.

So it has got more interesting but still kinda convoluted

Ehh the change is rushed and the reasoning behind the kidnapping lacking. Hopefully this changes

LET HER REMEMBER! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!

YES YES YES SHOUTO'S MUM IS GOING TO MEET OCHAKO AND KNOW SHE IS ALIVE! WHAT IS SHE TRIGGERS MEMORIES?!
FUCK YES I LOVE THIS STORY!

HAHAHAHA HE PUKED ON ALL MIGHT JESUS THIS IS LIKE WHEN SHE FIRST MET HIM LOLOLOLOLOLOL

Eri is coming home Aizawa!

Also can't wait to see the eventual reunion between the trio. I bet Shouto and Izuku will cry.

awesome

Im not sad, im disappointed