Well, I don't think they wanted to get married just for having sex, you know. Their bond is stronger than that

I can't stand Stoic. He is a physically abusive bully. Valka abandoned her son when she could have come back.

I don't normally leave comments but this was a very good story. I really liked how you took time to go into to hiccup's and astrid's relationship becouse often times that is skiped and people just right sex. It felt true. The fight with his father was written good aswel. I would love if you wrote more stories like this.

hiccup is irrating and needs forgive and forget. literally stoick said he was sorry. hiccup is such a disappointment and needs grow up literally

my opinion again Astrid is really annoying literally quite ooc

I feel stoick was right to certain extent due to the fact that many people of his tribe came to him with complaints of Thier behaviour. so I could see why stoick was conflicted. really it was hiccup and Astrid fault they really did not have to do the plan because they caused them self this mess. yeah just my opinion on the matter

you should really make this story have a sequel

This was an interesting story but the summary gave everything away and there wouldn't be much point in reading the story you could've been done with the summary after the second sentence

Those are the modern marital lines, u should of made something up, Hiccup will always be rich, he’s a Viking version of a prince and soon to be king!

They didn’t have tents

930pm? They didn’t have clocks make it more realistic I’m cutting that out while I read so it makes more sense

Twist ending did not see that coming

Ok this was freaking epic! I will admit the fight threw me off at first but I love how you made it work out! and I must say I could not stop laughing at that last chapter! overall: just freaking brilliant!

Thank you for your story, and all your hard work. Pretty good story.

Nice little short story.