This is so good man

Are you still updating? I miss pharos/ryoji

I ship this to death but all I can say is wow edgy**

I ship this to death but all I can say i y

Well umm. Yea that just happened

Wow. No angst...wonder how long this will last...

I think that this fic is really well-written. But sahe sheer amount of angst really turns me away from wanting to read anymore. It's all built up so much that I can't bring myself to continue reading because the good stimuli are to far apart. Pretty much whenever Minato is there things are good.

Damn if this isn't the most angsty Minato I've ever seen

This is a pretty good fic. I can tell how much you've improved, as I only found this a few days ago and have binged it, and even when your plot decisions were ones that I disagreed with or disliked you still kept me entertained enough to keep going. I hope your mood to write this comes back or at the very least you continue writing interesting stories.

I understand that you may not have time to write and I like how you don’t want your stories causing problems for others writers, but please update soon

I don't see how people want this to go in other directions, I think this story is compelling and hella interesting , hence why I binged the entire thing in one go. Keep it up :)

I mean I'm not good at criticism so all I can say is I love your writing but my favorite thing about your writing is it's brutality like the gore scenes. Keep up the good work

*Waits for that dank update*

This is edgy as fuck

makoto was so mean to kotone XD