I hate to be the bearer of bad news, but your story has a Mary Sue infestation. The best way to fix it is to kill Aurora ASAP. It’d improve your story.

You don’t mess with Syria that’s for sure.

Only someone as feisty as Aurora can handle Severus.

Sweet chapter!

Beware of the fine print...

Well you sealed your fate Severus

someone doesn't like my O.C. Oh well, there are tons of people who love Demetri and aren't afraid to hide behind an Annon review

Mary Sues are the worst type of OCs. This is where I quit reading. The first part of your first story was good, but it went downhill from there.

Your story would be better without the Mary Sue.

So where does Severs go from here? What does him being master of death mean? What all does his duty’s entail and how does he find out what those duties are? How does it affect his life as it is now as a father?

So now on top of everything else Severus has to be he master of death.

So what will happen to Aurora? Will they be able to fix the rip in the timeline? At least Severus has Harry.

At least now you know Severus what they want from you.

Yay - an update!

Oh Aurora, which will be worse the hangover or the memory of climbing into the wrong bed?