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just read this fic and it is INCREDIBLE! my fav rock is that crystal rock that's like in desert areas where it looks like a pathetic round lump of meh but then it cracks open and theres them Crystal's inside? worth like, nothing but still unassuming. keep up the great work honestly love the characters and how they're building!

YES YES YES YES! thank you so much for updating! I'm very curious as to what the inside info Chie's missing is in reference to... And does she have a summon now? And is Kakashi her brother now?

Ooo I see you added some more of your own seasoning to the naruto timeline ;) very interesting

I think of Tobirama as an intriguing figure, I guess. A lot more (openly?) pragmatic than Hashirama, certainly. He prioritizes his duties. I get the feeling that before Konoha, if he had the chance to reliably stop warring against the Uchiha without backlash, he would've. Why waste resources in fighting a feud whose purpose no one remembers? But because he couldn't stop fighting the Uchiha without serious repercussion to the Senju, the most prudent course of action was to eliminate the danger, a.k.a. fighting the Uchiha. Simple, logical deduction that he probably had to contemplate with Hashirama as his brother.

And yes, he is totally the God of Paperwork. Hashirama was definitely too focused on his dream-vision of Konoha to listen to the minutiae, so guess who had to build up Konoha bureaucracy from scratch?

Personally, I haven't been to enough rivers to have a concrete feeling about them, save for marveling at their size. Maybe I could see the Amazon River, or the Nile, and flesh it out someday.

Well, obviously I like food. I like being alive, after all. I like cooking a bit less, because it seems to take so long. My comfort food is plain, Greek yogurt, put on whatever I like.

Favorite kind of rock? Well, amethyst is rather pretty.

great, your date don't fit like mikoto was pregnant for year and all that, but love this fic xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

Very good chapter. I’m surprised this story doesn’t have more reviews, though I suspect the summary is to blame. I, myself skipped over this story various times before because of the vague summary. It really makes you believe the story is something less than what it is.

Its clear you put a lot of thought and work into this. Thank you I like this.

Wowow. I love this story so bad :’) Your writing and the plot and the characters,,, it’s all lovely. I hope to see more cute baby Itachi (and baby Akari too! but I don’t know why I feel as if she might be Karin). I also wanted to point out that I think you’ve already mentioned the fall of Uzo in previous chapters? Again, I think but i’m not completely sure. But I thought it was worth bringing it up. But yeah. This chapter was very much appreciated. Thank you for shriner it with us! I look forward to seeing what you’ve got planned :’)

Great chapter Rin! Keep up the good work

I'm happy to see the update. If you only plan on updating again when the story is complete, I would advise not posting every single chapter in one go. Instead, update a bit more slowly, such as once a week, to give readers the time to appreciate and comment every chapter. If you post all written chapters in one go, reader will only leave a comment on the last chapter they read.

This is just advice for you to get more comments and attention when you will next update.

*insert unintelligible screaming*

YOUR CHARACTERIZATION AND PLOT IS SO GOOD