DUN DUN DUNNNNN! Mysterious entrance! Who could it be?(audibly gasps)

He is a Mr. Uchiha, Sakura,just not the 1st one. This story is getting on my last nerves because you keep cutting it off at the perfect place! Stop this.
"Dickashi"(screaming)(I stole a comment name) gets me laughing like a school girl. He is a douche.

On the other hand I really want to further explore the story more. Come on! You've got a few more chapters in you, I just know it. Do it!Do it!Do it!;)

More Dickashi backstory.

This Sakura is gritty, she's real. A lotta people don't like AU but I seriously like the story you're building. I think this should be longer than 4 chapters. I am already connected to Sakura and even Dick!Kashi. They're both fleshy and have flaws and I respect writers who delve into characterization. You have a real talent for minimal descriptions but it conveys a lot. I can see the house of gei and I can understand Sakuras range of emotions. Being 17 is confusing enough and not she has Kakashi talking in her ear and all the teenage hormones and plus burden of her parents being sick and in the hospital. This story could serve as a coming of age even with the smut because I have felt this type of way before. Sorry for the scrappy review and if things are spelled wrong I was in the hurry to get out all thoughts. Please continue the story and know that people are reading and support you.

Enter Sasuke! Oh man this story! You make me so

happy whenever you update, not gonna lie lol. You can

tell that there's a lot of thought being put into the story

and it's absolutely amazing.

I literally can't imagine how the hell this is all about to

turn out and I think Kakashi is BIG lying.

He lowkey threatened Sakura too. That mf is kind of

insane. I get the feeling that he is going to go bat shit crazy soon. O.O

Oh god sasgay

Lol they s not in the little brother

It's Sasuke! I'm so confused tho!

I vote for SasuSaku ending pairing. There has been so many ItaSaku fics where they end up together lately that it will be nice to see her end up with Sasuke and not Itachi for once.

I am so so so obsessed with this story, I literally check it every day after work. So excited for ch.3! On ao3 it has a warning: rape/non consent. As for the rape/non-con, I would prefer that you leave it out for several reasons but one is good enough. w/ the aftermath of rape is really really tragic. Sakura would literally never be the same. It is a wound that never fully heal, and it can be challenging to write a character (especially one that is normally problematic enough). In a way that would be unrealistic to tie together in 4ch. Seems too deep for the smut tone.
I can't stress more that this is merely my opinion, and I would never want you to feel bound to it. However, you can look at my comment as a voice in the crowd. If you do ultimately decide to include it, please add a warning next update maybe. Maybe the warning was a mistake on ao3.
If it is wrong I'm sorry for getting personal.
Good luck! You are really talented and I can't wait to see what you do next!

That was pleasant and anticlimactic :(
Damn it Itachi, you had her right where we wanted her.
Now Sasuke is going to get her Vcard. Smh. Older siblings I tell ya.

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Dick move Itachi!

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Dickhole sleezy kakashi is funn

Omg I love this so much. I am so worried for Sakura though! Don't tell me but God, I'm hoping for a good ending to this. Also, War of Hearts was the first fic that got me info ItaSaku. How is Sasuke going to fit into this. I don't want to be biased but Itachi is already too good. Can Sasuke be sexier? Doubtful. Hopeful too.

Oh and one more thing, will there be Sasuke? Will this turn incestual? Is that even a word. I hope it doesn't but if it does that will be the first I've ever read.

At first, I just read the 1st chapter and was like," well this is boring," but after basicly my email getting spammed with another of your works coming out I was like fiiiiiiine I'll re-read it and wow.

Basicly so I don't write a fucking essay or some shit like that I'll sum it up: great story, awsome base idea, love the smut (I'm counting on it to get pornier soon), basicly great story this far (although I really need to catch up on my AUs or writing in gen).

I'm literally cringing at the ending. BUT, I'm here for it

and I loved this chapter!

You're the best! When is the next update? Will it be Sasgay?

I'm addicted already!