Very good story! You captured Tyras thoughts and fellings for Tim vividly. Congratulations and thank you for sharing.

I loved this. :-)

You have Tyra's fear and her longing very nicely here, and you can see her maturing over the progress of the story.

"...and Tyra doesn't owe him, but she loves him.
That turns out to be worse."

Aaaahhh crap. Every time I think I'm in a healthy relationship with FNL, you write something gorgeous like this that makes me want to start it all over again. What an awesome introspection into Tyra and her thoughts on love and Tim (which are kind of one in the same, hm?). Awesome as always.

This is so great - you've captured their characters perfectly. I'm still very happy that Tyra and Tim ended up together in the end! :D