OMG! SNAPE!

It was very good. I would love to read more about Camila Malfoy's adventures

I REALLY like your story!

I'm sorry I have nothing against OCs, wish-fulfilment or using cliches in fanfiction but this is a self-insert right? I suggest not to make it too obvious. If you want to make this interesting, Camilla has to be her own character, not a character the author is just using as her/his Author Avatar so that she can be a part of Harry Potter stories too. I suggest not to make Camilla too kind and good-hearted, since she was raised by the same parents like Draco. I mean, the main reason why Draco can be so mean, selfish and cruel is because of his family background, so why how is Camilla so different than the rest of her family? Considering her family background, I think Camilla's worldview should be different. Hope this helped. Goid luck.

Goodbye

Great story!

Carry on

super fab baby make more

Addys thoughts: It was very JOLLY! I loved the fact that Camilla and Harry were hooking up. IT WAS SO FABULOSA! AYYAYAYYAYAYAYYA. Cam is Creative. Draco is a drag. Harry is hilarious. Ron is Rude. Hermione is Haunted. I think that harry and cam should have some more mo-mental times. Ron should find a girl that likes him, Drako should like the girl that like ron. OHH SPICY Hermione should start crushing on Drako and drako should eventually start liking hermione!HOT TAMALES and or if Ginny weasly comes in she should crush and Harry and have all her dreams die. HAM 4 life Eventually LunaNievle should be a thing!BTW add me on snap chat animaladdy I would like you to do Cam and Harrys wedding and there job. BTW HARRY CAN NEVER LIKE CHO CHANG! Harry needs to go on so romantic dates with CAM! Have on of Cam and Harrys childrens names be Addy or Skyler. Have HAM get a unicorn! YASSS JUE 4 LIFE

Amandas thoughts: JUE LUKED UT ULUT UND WUNTS TU SUU MURE THUNK U SU MUCH HUHUHUHUHUHUHU UND JUE DUSUNT LUKE RUN WUSLY UR SUVURUS SNUPE 3

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Hermione

Aw come on! *pouts* couldn't you have done the time skip AFTER the summer of First Year? I wanted to see what the 'special arrangement' was that Narcissa said Lucius was promising/threatening Cami with when she came home for the summer. What did the Malfoys do to her? *pouts*

You soo misunderstood what I meant! I hope that I didn't hurt your feelings, I really didn't mean to! Because what I meant was that The Malfoys were sorted before Harry, Camila before Draco, Potter before Weasley.
I really like it, and keep up the good work

thanls5 Chishire cat! I actually planning on them getting together in year 5 but I wanted Cam to have this silly crush on Harry, like Ginny has on him. But thanks for the review!

I'm totally all for Harry and Cam getting together, but maybe once it hits year 4? I mean, 11 years old is a bit early? But also, it's your story, so go nuts! I'm liking it so far.