| Reviews for Path of Destiny |
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TORONTOSUN chapter 3 . 4/20 I like History. Good writing. |
life's a mystery chapter 3 . 4/19 great update :) |
SnowKing1701 chapter 3 . 4/19 Excellent chapter. I always enjoy your stories. This one in particular is very interesting. Keep up the good work. Take care. |
Swordwriter chapter 3 . 4/19 Absolutely a superb chapter. Very well researched and plotted. Exciting and holding the interest. First time I've seen a story where the proper marching commands were given. Too many times people use those stupid movie lines forward ho, or yo. Never existed in the U. . Only one very small detail wrong. The metal rank insignia on the collar as standard, was adopted several years later Swordwriter |
Pen to Paper Writer chapter 3 . 4/19 Even back then Custer was full of himself. I can't wait to see where you take us next. |
ucsbdad chapter 2 . 4/19 Interesting story, but one small niggle. Little Bighorn wasn't even the US Army's worst defeat by American Indians. That was the battle of the Wabash River, November 4, 1791, 623 Federal troops killed versus 268 killed at the Little Bighorn. Thanks for sharing. |
jag389 chapter 2 . 3/17 Great start. Look forward to your next update. JAG |
Guest chapter 2 . 3/11 great start so far, one quibble is it Major Castle or Captain castle? |
Pen to Paper Writer chapter 2 . 3/12 Well, this was an interesting second chapter. I was hoping that Rick could have persuaded Kate from tagging along but there would be no story if he was successful. It left me wondering what Kate's mission really is. Hmmm... |
TORONTOSUN chapter 2 . 3/12 I like history very much. I like how you mentioned Custer. |
Sandy0401 chapter 2 . 3/11 Awesome update, I love these other era stories. I'm glad Rick told Kate his issue with Custer. Can't wait for the next update. |
life's a mystery chapter 2 . 3/11 great :) |
Swordwriter chapter 2 . 3/11 The story is progressing well, except for one point. You cant seem to make up your mind about Castle's rank. You introduced in the start of the story as Major Castle. And then start calling him Captain Castle. Even if he were Brevet Major he would be addressed as major. And called major by his men. While brevets were still in use after the civil war, they were rare. Swordwriter |
Nancy chapter 1 . 3/8 Kudos to you and your daughter! |
Jhe chapter 1 . 3/8 Cool premise! Any more Paladin coming ? |