Reviews for If I had Come Back Five Years Later
Guest chapter 16 . 12/31/2018
I’m not sure if chapter is posted correct
Demarcod chapter 16 . 12/31/2018
Loved this especially the line about not killing JT as a way to honor him. Is going to continue as chapters or was this a one time thing because it was totally unexpected and great!
dukedk chapter 15 . 1/15/2018
I loved your story reading it was just a joy I wish they were more but I realize how stories must end but it had a fabulous ending
kaleik1 chapter 15 . 12/19/2017
I like this fic... need more with Jax and Tara.., happy ever after
tellmesweetlittlelies chapter 15 . 11/12/2017
Well, I don't like to let anything go. Do you have more stories planned? Maybe something from the intervening time between this epilogue and the end of your last chapter? I'd love to read them :)
tellmesweetlittlelies chapter 14 . 11/12/2017
Well, you've just made me melt with the "Daddy" comment, well done.
tellmesweetlittlelies chapter 13 . 11/12/2017
Well, I find it hard to have sympathy for Gemma, though it's interesting she likes Tara somewhere in the back of her mind. I do, however, like that Jax isn't completely over what she's done (killing JT) but isn't uncaring either. I think he absolutely would have cried on Tara's shoulder at that point, and the thought of Gemma with dementia is a unique one. Would you consider writing the conversation between Gemma and Jax when he learned the truth?
traceyklewis chapter 5 . 11/10/2017
Omg! Loved the ride! Sad that its over... but glad it ended the way it was supposed to!
BoutiqueBoutique chapter 15 . 11/9/2017
It was sad to Gemma in a nursing home, but all those lies finally caught up with her. Jax knowing the truth about JT and unable to do anything about it, that hurts!
Harper really accepted everyone around her as family. Jax wanted her to be his and she allowed that to happen, they club may not know the truth but they know she's important to protect. I like how you included all the Winston's, if they all had passed away while Tara wasn't there, Jax may have bot made it all at all.
Tig's right, Tara never forbade him from doing anything.
Jax and Tara always deserved one another.
Great story!
BoutiqueBoutique chapter 11 . 11/9/2017
Jax and Tara are like awkward teenagers, they have feelings for one another but have no idea how to approach a relationship especially with Harper being in the middle.
Same goes with Venus and Tig.
Adding the Eden storyline fits naturally. :-)
And then of course Kohn has to come back into the picture.
BoutiqueBoutique chapter 10 . 11/9/2017
Harper getting closer to Jax with tea time and Tig with an apology. :-)
Atleast Jax did admit to his past behaviour and Tara was glad she made the right decision to go to medical school. No more thoughts of what if. What if she stayed, she would have been broken by a cheating Jax. She is an independent mother who is stronger after what happened to her. I'm sure it pains Jax to see that see that scar and he couldn't protect her.
BoutiqueBoutique chapter 9 . 11/9/2017
I like how both ladies had a nice conversation with their some sort of significant other. :-)
They are working through some sort of a relationship withoit judging one another, just figuring out where each of them are in the relationship that currently is a friendship, where both of the guys want more but are being careful right now.
The girls talked a bit of their fears, and how the women are important to one another.
I think little bird, Harper is going to bring everyone a bit closer.
That jar of money would make a nice payment towards a student loan. :-)
Ang R chapter 15 . 11/8/2017
I love that she thanked Jax for becoming her dad, & him walking her down the aisle. I like that Jax & Tara had more kids. I'm very sad that it's over. Thanks for sharing!
Ang R chapter 14 . 11/8/2017
I like that Tara wants to be in Charming with Jax, starting fresh there with Harper.

I'm glad that Kohn's dead & that Tig figured out how to get it done without breaking Tara's rules.
Ang R chapter 13 . 11/8/2017
I really like the twist on Gemma having dementia, it's so creative & ive never seen it in another story.

I also like that the Winston family is still intact & growing.
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