| Reviews for Daybreak: Her Side Of The Story |
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Perplexahedron chapter 12 . 7/10 3 this is a masterpiece! |
Guest chapter 16 . 7/8 You’re an absolutely amazing writer! Thanks for doing this! |
shanehouse22 chapter 25 . 5/22 Wow, this story was amazing. I’m late to the party.. but so happy to of found it. |
SleepyDee chapter 12 . 5/16 I am squealing! I love it! |
Guest chapter 1 . 5/4 Omg theres going to be a full midnight sun release. Will you update your story based on the new canon version? |
jtstyles1 chapter 3 . 4/6 Perfeito |
DrFate1942 chapter 10 . 3/5 I guess I just needed to be patient... lol |
DrFate1942 chapter 9 . 3/5 What did Carine do?! |
H. S. Fuda chapter 7 . 2/29 Royal is so annoying. But I love Archie! Oh, the hardship of being a psychic. It's really exciting and emotional when she plays the piano I just love Earnest reaction. I really don't like that Royal is so self centered, I mean its okay to be, but feel ressentiment towards someone just because they didn't want you even through. he didn't want them either its just stupid and I would really like If he was more mature about it and in that scene Edythe could have been more matured as well, and just so you know I am not criticizing your writing, that this perfect one I’m just giving my opinion about the characters. |
H. S. Fuda chapter 6 . 2/29 "I had not had enough of him yet." That thought is just great! I agree that Edythe is less serious than Edward The narration is great as always! |
H. S. Fuda chapter 6 . 2/27 Adorable. Deliciousthrist aside. Best line lol |
H. S. Fuda chapter 5 . 2/27 I always loved the lineThe wasting of finite resourses is everyone's problema." lol |
H. S. Fuda chapter 5 . 2/27 That chapter was very amusing! I love the internal dialogue of Edythe ️ |
H. S. Fuda chapter 4 . 2/27 That discussion was so exiting and also a little frustraring, I totally side with Carine's opnion. And as aways the writing is awesome! |
H. S. Fuda chapter 3 . 2/27 Edythe doesn't recognize she's jealous! Can't for her to noticed what she os already feeling for him! I guess we all know she is terrible at leaving him. I'll have to check the songs you mentioned on each chapter, I'm sure they will be great! |