*sighs* In theory, there's nothing wrong with having OCs in a canon storyline. But if you're going to do that, at least give your OCs an actual PURPOSE. This is literally just a blow by blow of the first episode with a little extra commentary sprinkled in from time to time. If I wanted to see all of these scenes, I would go watch the actual episode.

Isn't the Silver Crystal 'One of a Kind' Wouldn't it be better to call Selena's Crystal Platinum? It also doesn't help that a Sailor Crystal is also a person's Star Seed which are entirely unique to said Senshi. I wonder if Selena draws her power from ALL Moons in the Solar System instead of just Earth's Moon?.

i liked this but i feel like selena didnt really do much and like usagi was more concerned about mamoru i know in this those two are like brother and sister but i feel like selena hardy did anything and she barely even talked i was definitely expecting more interaction with her and mamoru and like whats up with the wind like why doesnt she have her own attacks she should be the most powerful and doing most of the destruction of the youmas not usagi

What the used having Selena but not as the main character rather than Usagi... In the story Selena did not have many scenes and when there is Usagi came in the spotlight... Can count how many in one chapter she did not talk or interact with other character... Her personality is a bit blurry... Why she more overprotective and babying Usagi? Her relationship with her family also lacked... At beginning Selena cats did not hint they are like Luna or Artemis... So sorry if my comment above a bit harsh... But it a reality... And sorry to said it but form the start until the middle of the story I did not feel the excitement of the storry... And i cant read until the end... But it nice to know the story and author can always improve yourselves... Ok... Thanks you for the story

I'm kinda really hoping ur not ending it there so hopefully i'll see an update soon

I like the story but Celestia doesn't do much in the story and seems pretty useless still the story is good maybe she'll be more useful and do more later on?

Hello, I love this story a lot but there are some points I do not understand; Is Lulo a human girl? (because I thought it was a cat).

If she is human and Selena's twin sister why Selena is in the same class as Usagi? (Since Selena is 15 years old and Usagi is 14 years old).

There is also a little trick that hurts me, I think your story is concentrated on Selestia but for the transformation it seems invisible ...

(she is so invisible to these moments that I thought she was not transformed any more except to remind her of her past for what use the tattoos that Selena carries? Will she remea Teddy again?

Otherwise I look forward to seeing the rest and I am too happy that the knights of Endymion are alive. Good luck for the rest (I read the fic in 2 days, I'm too happy).

i loved it. though i wonder what happened with Zoicite and the others, since the scouts lost their memories. Did they loose theirs or are they safe.

i remember this episode. this was one time I so wanted to smack and shake the heck out of Usagi.

YAY! we got to see lily and james again.

it wouldn't be usagi and Rei if they didn't bicker

aw i feel for her. that other girl should hold that regret with her.

i love what you have written so far. and i can't wait for the next chapter. especially can't wait for Endymion to get his memories back

YAY!

sailor venus has arrived