Reviews for TFP: Revolutionary
Guest chapter 20 . 7/20
Love it. Can't wait for more.
Starpottergeek chapter 20 . 7/9
And remember that raf’s alt mode is a reaper drone
Shakespeare RZA chapter 20 . 7/1
To StayinFrosty212:

Secrets don't last forever. Eventually the truth will get out to the public that the existence of the Cybertronian Civil War on Earth is not a myth. Far too many people have witnessed it now. The question is this: How will the people of Earth handle this truth? Will the authoritarian U.S. Government use this as an advantage for their own shady political purposes?

It's like what Agent K from MiB once said: A person is smart, but people are dumb, crazy, paranoid, fanatical, fearmongering, hatemongering, stubborn, judgemental, and other various points of view. Think about it. How will the people of Earth handle this truth?

Eventually, that dam of secrets will break because it won't hold the flood forever.

"What's done in the Dark will be brought to the Light." Quote by Johnny Cash.
Solid Dog chapter 20 . 6/26
I hate cliffhangers! Please tell us you'll have more as soon as you can!
Solid Dog chapter 20 . 6/26
To StayinFrosty212:

Son of a Gun! I was wondering when Starscream would start planning his escape. Wonder if he's bringing Breakdown with him?

I really cannot wait to hear what happens next! Great job and keep up your great work!
Draegoon chapter 20 . 6/23
nice chapter, family stuff. but Starscream is just out and about now, what chaos might this bring!? kinda wan't him to run into Clair and be tamed by Adorableness and Preciousness. i keep thinking of that scene in Transformers where the little girl asks Ironhide if he's the tooth fairy, adorable.
Valentina1105 chapter 19 . 6/23
classic Gibbs slap XD
Starpottergeek chapter 20 . 6/23
good job cant wait for the next chapter. starscream is so dead now that cliffjumper is in stasis that probably just pissed off arcee and jack. now i would recomend the next family to visit be ether sari's dad or sierra's parents. good job on the weapons mentioned so far so rafs like an upgrades soundwave with more tentacles, blasters and some tesla cannons. i would like to recommend a few weapons for vince he already has his stone cannons but for melee weapons i would recommend ether an axe or wreaking ball on a chain. for carly's melee its pretty obvious just have her tail rotor be a sort of buzz saw. sierras melee weapon should be blades similar to arcee's. and i thing you should give spike a sort of magnet gun. ill let you know on other ideas when i get them. arcee should take sierra under her wing like a teaching protégé. and finally maybe in the future some of them could become a combinder like devestator. well thats my review i have really enjoyed this story so far ill be waiting for the next chapter and keep up the good work.
Shakespeare RZA chapter 19 . 6/15
To StayinFrosty212:

Here's another quote you could use for any of your chapters in the Future:

"The greatest trick the Devil ever pulled off was convincing the world he didn't exist."

Quoted by Roger "Verbal" Kint from the crime/thriller movie The Usual Suspects. One of the greatest in cinema history.
Solid Dog chapter 19 . 6/4
To StayinFrosty212:

I'm sorry. I admit, stories like this get me a little carried away. I'm done now and it won't happen again.

Great chapter and good luck with the others.
Solid Dog chapter 19 . 6/4
Okay! I'm sorry! Calm down!
Ghostalker chapter 19 . 6/2
You need to have them use the Forge to make a recharging station for it. And maybe use the unfinished Synthetic Energon formular to refill it.
atsik101 chapter 19 . 6/2
Nicely done my friend, but i must ask you about when are their human families are going to ask about Jack's Decepticon shield and whether or not is he going to have Rachet replace it with the Autobots shield?
d8rkforcen1ght7 chapter 19 . 6/1
Good chapter. Very few grammatical errors but some sentences could have been a bit better phrased. Stay safe!
kristinalprime23 chapter 19 . 6/1
wow i guess im not the only one who hates this virus as well, eh enough said, good job, though not surprising, remember you mess with cliffjumper and you get the horns.
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