| Reviews for The Trouble with Traffic |
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KiSierra chapter 1 . 4/8/2018 Really cute and funny! Liked it very much :) |
J.J. Norris chapter 1 . 9/18/2017 That was absolutely hilarious. Good job. Though, it got confusing about who was talking every now and then. |
Moisture chapter 1 . 9/13/2017 Love the concept! But this wasn't m rated enough. Without the naked guy it wouldnt be m rated, and he was unnecessary to the plot. And please introduce the people who are talking. I honestly got lost at some points during the story about who was talking to who. |
Guest chapter 1 . 9/11/2017 Hola, a mi me gusta, cortó y directo al punto, está bueno |