a reversal of roles not a bad idea

This is a very interesting fic, I really enjoyed the change in canon and the relationship mentorship you build with Videl and Bulma and the relationship.

I really like where you are going with this story and hope its not discontinued. The characters are all really well done and the relationship between gohan and videl is being built in a solid way. Hope to see more chapters in the future as Id like to see Gohans reaction to her knowing about him and all ready knowing Bulma.

I'm gonna take a guess and say Bulma got 18 to do it. She's the only woman that can fly, after all. XD

Ahhh, I always love Erasa. I'm glad she got Videl to start thinking of the romance stuff. She's starting to get the dokidokis and it's adorable.

And Videl, just tell Gohan you're the SCH. What's he gonna do, think you're weird? He's weirder than that. Just do it so that he can tell you stuff and then you'll be able to talk freely with one another!

I love your writing! Keep it up ( more GHVI!)

Our Videl is not sensitive here. XD when will she sense that Gohan like her...or until Gohan confession :))))))

I think the most fun part in this chapter is wtf from Videl when she read the "heroine" save the day XD.

Um...just say Gohan seems not actually have the willing to get into save other things...I mean when he heard somewhere happen criminal, he doesn't think about use his ability to help but just stay :33'

Otsukaresama!

very interesting

I was expecting Bulma to bribe Vegeta into helping, but I dont think anything could convince him to wear a teenage girls clothes.

Awesome chapter! Can't wait for more

Here I am :))) sorry for late xd

To say Videl first, she is more elegance here, quiet and more feminise. Fluent in French(I think that cool), know more about art. So when she was hit then said "fuck" I am totally shock XD...bty I think she is cool in Julia suit :)

You let her met Bulma first and have a mentorship from Bulma the idea is fresh. And since that she become more girly, and becasu of this reason her character not that same as the original one(hilarious and tomboy style) is ok. Um... but I still hope she can be more cheerful :)))...

Then Gohan, he knew Videl first, had a impression in mind first then met the real one, I like this build up. But I think he is overreacting in ch7, anyway his action is cute made me laugh lol. And...Gohan's dream is sweet I like that xd.

There are some scenes to recall some moment in DBZ such as Gohan find Videl when she against the thief, I think that some kind of related to the original story is also good here.

About Vegeta, we had talked before so I skip XD

The pov change writing style I can't tell that's good or not, I am little bit not accommodate at first, but then some part I will wonder how the another side pov will look like. :3

And to say the newest chapter. I love the Apollo idea, I laughed to read Gohan feel sad when he heard Videl "boyfriend" XD.

Um... I am looking forward what Gohan will do to the heroine, and his feeling to Videl what will it be. I will wait and see :)))

Thanks for writing, and don't let me wait too long joke take your time no pushing :33

I really enjoyed the story and would love to know what happens next. Please update again soon...

love it well done

I usually really enjoy this story, but I have to admit this chapter was kinda meh. The whole "Gohan thinks Apollo is Videl's boyfriend but it's actually a horse" part felt forced. The fact he didn't ask who Apollo was felt contrived. I mean, even if he'd gotten a vague response that just reinforced the idea they were talking about a person, it would've at least made it more believable, especially since your Gohan's more suspicious and curious of Videl.

The whole height thing was kinda weird as well? Like, who asks how tall a horse is? I get this was probably to clue in the reader that Apollo wasn't human, but I really don't think it was necessary. Not to mention it made things confusing with how you viewed character heights. Does this mean everyone in the DBZ cast has more "normal" heights in this fic? Cause Piccolo's somewhere around Apollo's height in canon and Ox-King is definitely taller. But I guess that's more of a nitpick. :P

Since you mention Videl speaking French in the Author's note, I guess I can comment on it. Google Translate was merciful, no mistakes whatsoever. I don't really mind the notion that Videl is fluent in another language since I myself have a headcanon that she speaks fluent Spanish (although it's more like "the Satan family is bilingual and Latino"). I like the idea that she decided to learn French because she thought it was cool as heck. It kinda feels like when young anime fans decide to learn Japanese fuelled solely by their love of Japanese things. It's kinda dorky and endearing, but also speaks volumes about her dedication and motivation because French is hard as hell to learn.

just started this but I love the new take on a old story keep it up!

Hey! you are one of my favorite GhVi active authors right now! Please keep writing . I'm enjoying both of your stories!