That was really good. Subarashii

this is 10/10 my favorite of all lily spin offs. read this multiple times love it

It was pretty interesting, and not for the usual reasons. As pat for the course for Lilyverse stories, it doesn't relay too much on plot, but more in character studies.

A bit disheartened that Shirou was just left to burn.

Kirei has literally Death as servant Assassin. It's a good thing he has no clue just what he's dealing with.

This was awesome.
There is little else I can say that will eloquently explain how amazing I think this story is.
Besides the fact that I look forward to reading other stories of yours and that I laughed my ass off multiple times, there truly is little else I can say.

I didn’t think I’d enjoy this as much as I did, having not consumed any of the fate series, but I loved it and could not stop reading

Lily seem to have some misconception about political and arranged marriage. Arranged marriages (still practiced today by the majority of people around the world) were common even among commoners and simply people and their purpose is to ensure the continuation of peoples bloodlines and to protect gullible young hormonal woman from bad decisions and men. Political marriages are the same as normal arranged marriages only with an additional political purpose.

I loved this. I thought the dialogue was amazing. I normally avoid fanfics that are genderbent but this was way beyond being worth reading. A Harry Potter x Fate/series was perfect for me. You have my comeplete respect.

I'll admit I did not see Lily using Excalibur and possibly using a Reality Marble.

Given that this is marked complete... From what I've read of your Sisyphus fics, wouldn't the primary-most characterization be 'Team Lily' (lives to inadvertently frustrate and or confuse the keyboard smash out of everyone, full stop)?

Sorry, that just was in my brain loudly and persistently enough to insist on 'type, external proof of internal monologue, type away'!

Also, have you the writer ever heard of TV Tropes?

...Mental note to self; dear brain, why do you insist on being awake at 0300 o'clock. Never mind, I'm obviously going to keep reading.

This story does not make my head hurt nearly as much. Love the Independence Day speech though.

XD

I KNOW THAT SPEECH!

I adore Lily's endless references, especially when I actually get them.

Ohmigods the pair of them drunk out of their minds is absolutely brilliant. 3 10/10, would spectate!

"His Lilly Senses are tingling"?! So apt! Good for him to have developed such a warning system! She certainly merits such.