I thought she was the Brightest Witch of her age? She sure is putting that rumour behind her as she is an idiot when it comes to those two men.

Surprise twist ending. Bravo

It's not a bad story but the grammar and spelling is really bad and it distracts from the story. I'm not trying to be mean but you need someone to look this over and edit it

The amount of control you have in the Weasley’s and Harry is unrealistic. Molly and Ron it’s inline with their character, but Hermione wouldn’t subject herself to that much control and abuse.

**dragon/pterodactyl screech noises** OMG! *flails*

I must go read the sequel. NOW! AHH!

If she's taking the room on the first floor, why is she going upstairs? The first floor is the ground level..

lol that is one elaborate wd. I guess it takes a magical genius and a horn dog with an unsatisfactory lovelife to get such a result. Though I guess harry n Voldemort are also at fault given that in the hp verse some people n snake hybrids don't die when they are killed.

Finally some griffindors friend of hers actually helping with the research. though I guess it's a dark spell since it involves the dead .

Though if I were Lucius I'd place them all over the library to discourage her from going over.

Lol hermione and her bomb on Remus.

I kinda pity Remus. He is felling an uncontrollable lust from hermione when his son is near by . Well at least teddy hadn't been on his lap when that happened otherwise it is awkward. Hmm will Remus n Sirius develop oral fixiations if they feel the same thing as hermione .

Draco seems to be more of a true grand than Harry or the rest of the Weasleys. The griffindors don't even bother to help research a solution. How difficult is it to read a book. some like Ginny isn't working full time. She could have left the kids with molly n come help research. Ron is just doing his version of Pmsing. You'd think the number of times hermione had abandoned her needs for harry he'd be more grateful n come help read some books.

Wonderful story and amazing twist at the end. Cannot wait to read the sequel. I especially liked how you had Hermione tweak Lucius all the time she used his library. There was a point in the middle where I almost wished Draco was part of the love triangle with Hermione in the center, but the conclusion is wonderful with Astoria brought in loving the new Draco.

Though Ginny's first love might actually be Voldemort.

wtf...so all of it was a premonition dream?! ...Please make a sequel. I can't bear it to end that way.

Holy f*** ! That's a twist I didn't see coming.
Thank you so much for this story. Just know a sequel would get a warm welcome.