Like I said, don't bother reading this. It's my first story and it absolutely sucks.
I'm only keeping this up because it's still one of my works, and I don't like deleting things. Seriously, read one of my other stories, they'll a lot better.

I'm really tempted to end this project, because I don't know how to end this, and I have more fun writing my other fic. if anyone has any suggestions, please review or PM me

umm lol hae you even wached thr movies? its not dark star its deth star and not star gardians its gardians of galaxy lol noob

Is adorable! I love that there're people who still writting about this perfect couple, just OTP. Great and cute job

Don't you think you killed them off too early? You could have made Jinx's death more disturbing by having Jhin torture her and kill the other 2 later.
A good chapter nonetheless.

we are tiny, so just be easy :) everything is gonna be ok.

The starting point is amazing but the rest not really.
I think you rush it a bit with the confession of lulu and veigar.

Interesting! And I just love viegar and lulu ️ should add me on league -Dragonly- ️️ Can't wait for more

This site could always use more Lulu and Veigar stories so it's good to see a new one. In this first chapter you seem to be using original Veigar lore. Since the star guardians have their own lore in valoran city You may want to move Veigar to their location and lore rather than changing everything else. Just a suggestion! Good luck writing :)

I like it !