Truly excellent writing dear, most pleasing to read

I thoroughly enjoyed this. Very well written and awesome character development.

Bravo! Lilianna is an amazing, three-dimensional character. Her interactions with Loki and other Asgardians is very human, and seeing him change while starting to care for her is an amazing progression.
There's a reason this is my latest favorite!

ofcourse you are a Doctor Who fan

OK did Lilly and Loki just do their own earthquake at the half way point of the story?
and why does NO ONE seem to respect a CLOSED door... special a bedroom door...?! like really... who does that? other than parents or siblings?

its nice now reading Lilly and loki's relationship really coming together... nothing beast someone trying to kill you to kick start the romance

Thanks for writing this story I look forward to reading the next. Great ideas and great character, Although I do think that Sif is a abut out of character. But I guess that can be done when you are writing fan fiction with an original character and the present characters interact with them.

OMG, THAT WAS AMAZING, is a perfect redaction, if the first chapter is like that, i cant wait for read the next, good job panita

So far I like this. There are a few spelling errors, which I am trying to ignore, (sorry, it’s a pet peeve of mine), but I am intrigued to know who and what she is.

Number 1: I hate you. I was up all night reading this because from the first sentence I was hooked.

Number 2: I never in a million years though that I would ever utter the words: STFU about Loki and tell me more about this woman!

What I expected from this book: Girl With daddy issues humps Loki.

What I got: Girl orphaned and treated like dirt beats up Loki, throws glitter in his face, and finds out that people are not so bad after all. Seriously! Why are you not writing for Marvel and making a butt load of money!

Every word of this story was amazing and I am going to start on the sequel tomorrow. Please do not stop writing or kill off this girl.

Oh my god. I did not know that fanfiction could be this good! I looked at your profile and can't wait to read more.

Please keep writing! Your work has soul in it that amazed me! It actually made me cry in parts and I love Lilliana!

loved this story - you are very talented.

GOD! THIS WAS SOOOO GOOD!

Great story!

Awwww... That was so sweet! Can't wait to read their next adventure.