Reviews for Shinobi Mage
Love Faith Embers chapter 2 . 6/30
It's all squished together... Hard to read.
Elfin69 chapter 2 . 2/19
i am surprised that you jumped so far into the future and wonder if it is Naruto being born or another baby to Kushina and why are they not speaking Japanese when talking since that is their normal language.
foxchick1 chapter 2 . 2/2
I am loving this more please.
Dark Neko 4000 chapter 2 . 1/28
What will happen next time
SilentSnowLeopardNinja chapter 2 . 1/26
Annnnnnnnnnnnd my interest has waned. You immediately skip over a decade to the bs triwizard cup section of the harryverse that somehow not only forces Harry to appear(how?!) but his team as well(why?!). Each going by, I assume, codenames so that we don't know who is who except for Harry, when he arbitrarily decides to admit to having a specific name to people he don't know, and gets referred to as Harry for the rest of the chapter when he stated he doesn't acknowledge it as his name as he has a different one he's grown into. I get the bickering of the 3man team was meant for humor and exposition but if they are ANBU (with the masks and codenames) their actions and words make them look...foolish and even unprofessional since an unknown assailant in a big room full of unknowns attacked them out the blue and managed to land a slight hit which depending on the spell could have been terrible. Have they not developed any routine plans to deal with unknown and abrupt situations since it "happens all the time" apparently? Also did the Potters have more kids after abandoning Harry? They chose to keep a son named Benjamin last chapter right? But in this one some Potter boy named William is asking if they're brothers. Did they ever even TRY to find Harry?
SilentSnowLeopardNinja chapter 1 . 1/26
Hm. Wrong boy who lived story mixed in with a Harry is an Uzamaki AU crossover with a dash of goodPetunia thrown in...you have my attention good sir and/or madam.
bellapom chapter 2 . 1/25
I like the beginning
Guest chapter 2 . 1/24
Good story have you ever thought of pairing Harry with Sasuke or Gaara? hope you update
917brat chapter 2 . 1/23
Did Snape hire him to kill Voldemort?!
mizzrazz72 chapter 2 . 1/22
Lily should be slapped.
xXxOtAkU-444xXx chapter 2 . 1/22
I really like it
SkylerHollow chapter 2 . 1/22
Looks fun, guessing the little brother on the way is Naruto? Can't wait to see the mayhem and destruction Obake's team cause due to this tourney.
dingo-822 chapter 2 . 1/22
Ok, it looks good, they seem to be acting causal about weird shit but let them get serious soon.

Also, please make a new line when someone talks since it just look like one big paragraph. I new line with a new person speaking will help someone reading move from person to person.
zero fullbuster chapter 2 . 1/22
Love it.
Please write more.
ItsCallidus chapter 2 . 1/22
Shows promise but it’s very hard to follow. Please work on your sentence structure and grammar.
37 | Page 1 .. Last Next »