| Reviews for Our Turn |
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   KevlarKitten chapter 2 . 7/31 The rapid switches to third person from first and back again make for hard reading. Enjoying the storyline though. |
| DarkFireAngel00 chapter 22 . 6/30 Damn. This story hits super close to home. Minus all the supernatural shit of course lol. Baylee is a effin boss and I love that about her. Everything’s been thrown at her so fast and I’m impressed that she’s still functioning at this point. I wouldn’t want to be left alone to overthink everything to death either. Ughhh and the cop following her home was just the frosting on the shit cake. Poor Baylee. I can’t wait to see how she handles everything. At least she has Jake to help her out though |
| PastOneonta chapter 22 . 4/26 Welcome back! Who was following Baylee? Coincidence? Pack? Jacob or any of the wolves wouldn’t follow by car though. Nick? He couldn’t have found her that quickly since Zach got there I hope. She needs to get some rest and Zach needs to make a plan to move. He might be a decent guy to Baylee but he’s still trouble. Thanks for the chapter, hope all is well. |
| PastOneonta chapter 21 . 12/29/2019 So much has happened since Zack showed up, she doesn’t know what to believe or how to handle it. She does see that Jacob is sincere and he’s hurting too. What does she do? How can she accept all this? It’s new and scary and her life hasn’t had any kind of magic in it. Then there’s Zack laying on the couch and she’s probably worried if he can leave or if anyone is looking for him. She’s been worried about being found. She knows the eyes of the wolf and might be able to see it as Jacob. I hope so. Thanks for continuing and coming back to this story. Baylee is a great character, we care about her. We want to know that she will be okay and find happiness. Looking forward to the rest. |
| PastOneonta chapter 20 . 12/29/2019 This was tough. She got caught up in a life and didn’t know how to get out, had no one and no where to go. Tough to see her struggle when she really is a good person. Having a mom who doesn’t give a damn is heartbreaking. Now we know what happened at the end with Nick and why she finally left Everett. Thanks for the chapter. |
| vampbtch chapter 2 . 12/27/2019 who is "her"? Do you have a beta? You need to read this before submitting it. |
| wood-morning chapter 21 . 12/27/2019 oh baylee. the sympathy i feel for her.. thank you for the update! |
| WarriorofMyth chapter 19 . 11/7/2019 Aaaaaaahhhhhhh soooooo good |
| firstofhername chapter 19 . 9/6/2019 Love it! Can’t wait for more! |
| coralvortex chapter 19 . 8/31/2019 Great story so far, love to see how this unfolds |
| peygoodwin chapter 19 . 7/29/2019 Love |
| Guest chapter 19 . 6/9/2019 Wow I am absolutely obsessed with this story ! I have read it twice because of your amazing attention to detail and the way you made the building of their relationships so genuine and fluid! Love love love ! |
| wood-morning chapter 19 . 5/15/2019 Oh shit. Oh no. Poor Bailey. Poor JACOB. I can’t wait to see how they overcome this! Thank you for this update! I’m excited for what happens next! |
| Liljaiiris chapter 19 . 5/13/2019 Oh, now it’s getting interesting :) Eagerly waiting for the next chapter! |
| LunarFairyPrincess1989 chapter 19 . 5/12/2019 I absolutely love this story! I cannot wait to read more of it. |
