The premise for this story is really cute. I really like how you are developing the family dynamic. Anyways enjoyed reading what you’ve written so far. Hope you get around to updating again soon.

please update, it's very interesting

i would love to see what the black fish makes of everything!

Hope you continue, would love to read more. I read that hate comment, ignore that person. It is clear they are to afraid to write their own story and publish it, so they spread hate to others who have the courage to write stories and publish it for the world to see Xxx

Too many holes. Starfall isn’t near King’s Landing, especially by sea, a Northman going south to Starfall and staying with Ashara Dayne would have been spotted just as much as Ned was. The time frame between the deaths of Brandon and Ashara and the birth of Jon don’t line up anywhere near enough. You’re really trying to make a fanfiction by stretching a shit ton of truth but trying to remain serious. Your writing is okay, but the premise is utter trash. Instead you make him someone else bastard with her knowing. I don’t think this was well thought out. It sucks that game of thrones is littered by bad fanfiction with people that don’t even try to think about their project in depth. Another reason why sucks...

Please update, I love it

Awww... Cute little Wolf Pack, all snoozing in a pile.

My heart is overwhelmed by soft fluffy feels at this chapter.
Tip one back for Moms everywhere, lads!

Luwin is trusted? Maester Walys was the Maester at Winterfell until the rebellion, Luwin would be less know to Ned than Cat is! All it takes is one carrier pigeon to the Citadel and their asses are all grass. Who knows if Luwin was originally from the Stormlands before he took his vows or just didn't like the Targs?

Loved this story, also i think the Daynes were so easy to sway cause they losed too much

A newborn baby wouldn't have their eyes open for Ned to know if they're blue. Still, the boys are adorable and I'm glad they actually act like children cause it's a stupidly hard thing to find in fanfiction.
I'd say that I can't wait for the plot to get going but honestly you could just write a about their daily lives and completely ignore how terrible the asoiaf world is and I'd still read it. Your writing stile is very engaging and easy to follow and I have a weakness for letting my beloved characters be cute children forever so just keep doing what you're doing, this is very nice

Honestly though I’m just looking forward to Robb completely cutting apart the angst and fear during the reveal of Jon real heritage when they’re like teens or something and it just going something like: Robb: but do you realize what this means *in shock*
Jonon the verge of a panic attack* w-what?
Robbgrinning* I’m actually older than you hahaha
Jonincredulous* really that’s what you decide to focus on

Wow! I don't recall ever seeing this story before! I can't believe I had missed it!
I just read it all now and I love it!
I love the bond between Ned and Cat. I love how they love their family. I love the lie they came up for Jon. I love Benjen and the role he's playing here. Etc.
Please tell me you'll keep updating.
Thanks!

Thank you!

This was so sweet! I love Catelyn!

Just to say- I appreciate tremendously that you know how babies work and their growth/development. Too often in fanfics there are “smart” one year olds who converse in full grammatically correct sentences about advanced topics. I know it’s small, but it immediately stood out to me. Kudos!