The skill and magic seems too strong for their possible level,both dusk and raven)

reading this in one day was a mistake. its 11 pm. im crying my fucking eyes out. holy shit dude. the fic gets worse before it gets worse than worse. it never got better. what the actual Fuck. they all fucking died. what the Hell what the Fuck why why why whywhywhy

i hope ulbert appears next mommonga and they reunite

Welp, saw that coming. After no updates for over a year, the author scrambles together a rushed ending and decides to just kill everyone. Was kinda hoping Ulbert could reunite with Ainz, but to no avail. Ruby’s kidnapping ended up pointless, Mizumi ended up pointless, the World Item ended up being pointless, etc.

Basically, everything the story was building up was thrown out by the last few chapters alone. What a shame too, it had such promise, in spite of the poor grammar. I can not in good conscience recommend this to any new readers, as the ending is sadly disappointing. You’d at least think the R.O.B from back in chapter 1 would’ve done something, but nope. Now there’s nothing left at all.

Wow um that's a ending alright...

However Story good despite on my last comebt.
Earlier was my opinion about the plot as a whole

Oh man. I really had hoped that at least Mizumi or some of the Evil Lords would survive. Now all that's left is Amber and who knows, perhaps Cinder just stabs her in the back or something. Oh wait, Amber was stronger than Cinder with the maiden powers now, wasn't she? But still now all that's left of Ulbert's reign and the demons is her and the dungeon. And I'm not entirely convinced whether she would be a good ruling figure for that new world.

Well at least I'm sure that she'll try and lead the faunus to a future, carry out Ulbert's will and preserve his teachings and either enslave or kill the remaining pockets of humanity that survived the fall of the kingdoms. I don't exactly know if all of the spawning pools of the grimm are gone now or not or if they even survived the death of their maker.

The gods surely are a piece of work, aren't they? Just coming down after having left for millennia only to try to wipe out all sentient life on the planet again for another experiment. Good thing, they won't be bothering anything anymore now that they are liquified.
(start playing the Terminator theme) Oh no...

It was a fun ride from the beginning to the end. Seeing his rise to power and his struggles as a demon. It's a bit unfortuante that it ends like that, but perhaps it's for the better. The last chapters took up quite the pace and each time a loose end was resolved in a hurried fashion. Still overall a decent story. Now I'm excited for the ending.
A real plot twist would be if all of this was nothing more than a collective dream that Demiurge and the Evil Lords in Nazarick had. Well, we'll see in the epilogue.

Well that was surprising.

fast pace though...

You kill story((( it's a shame that final and Ulbert's death become predictable in the last 8 chapters.
And the author could not follow the idea of evil to end. just killed everyone in the end. it's a pity at the beginning everything looked more promising and less predictable.

that's the end? what?

Nice magic show.

So dramatic.

So he has a delete button for gods, pretty handy

ulbert use world item agenst Salem(god)?

Another thing I'd like to point out is that most of your chapters seem dreadfully short. Your output of words for each chapter seems to be around or no more than a few hundreds. This kind of practice would be acceptable for other literary practices that intentionally foster shorter word counts, like a one-shot, poem, or a haiku for instance. But I normally find that even one-shots are typically longer than this. I suggest at least going for 2k words minimum for each chapter. Doing so, I believe, would break the monotony of your future updates.

From you relying primarily on dashes to your word count for each chapter that I've just discussed, what are your personal thoughts on all this? I'm eager to hear your side of the answer as the author.