really fricken good

id say this was one of the most cutest stories ive read so far, it was really adorable.

hdjdjdjdjf i love it this fic was beautiful thank

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Hello! Another nice chapter. Cuddles and fluff are and always will be my weakness. Good job. Also, the slightly sexual tones between them was good too. There's no way they forgot about last night and it shows. Weiss being possessive of Ruby is one of my favourite things in a fic and this fic had it so I'm happy.

Nothing to complain about really. I hope to see plenty more cuddles and fluff from you in the future. May your whiterose be cuddly and fluffy and adorkable as always. Take care.

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Hello! Good smut. Really good smut. I can see the line I put in which makes me feel all warm and fuzzy inside. Thanks!

As for the smut, it was very well done. The attention to Ruby's clit and Weiss' loving remarks/appreciation for Ruby and her body were awesome. Ofc, asking for consent is good too. Shows the lover and trust between them. You hit all the major points for first smut. Attention to the clit, attention to the breasts, love and adoration, and trust. Well done.

Great story, really enjoyed it. I always enjoy reading about my favorite pairing, keep up the great work .

Hello! I throughly enjoyed this fic. Really this was an awesome job for your first fic. I hope to see this continue with more fluffy times and smut. I am eagerly looking forward to more

Welcome to the WR family! Hope to see you around for a long time

Hey man, great job on your first fic, keep the fluff up, and smut next chapter?