awww this is sooo cute author-sannn. please write more story about them. and of course sweet story like this. i need this in my daily life. please dont stop writing. God must bless you for writing such wonderful story.

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I don't think you did a bad job, actually! The only advice I would give is for you to check the grammar, but that's my only complaint. I think that you handled Kyoya and Takeshi pretty well, considering how polar opposite their characters are. But then again, 10 years does change a lot in a person. I can totally believe them getting closer, if only for the sake of there being silence and good company. I don't see why they can't start falling for each other during those interactions. And for this being my first HibarixTakeshi story that I've read, I like it. *smiley face*

This is probably going to be one of my favorite one shots! The characters were nicely thought out and the flow was smooth! You are a magnificent writer!