I love this! Great job!

*clap* *C l a p* this was great. I loved it * S o b*

:,( deja voo

Very good idea! Hit me with the feels, but in a good way.

3 love

"And by the way you're grounded for another month."
"Oh come on!"
"And because this is your tenth time in here for reckless behavior, you win that month with Vision!"
Random confetti everywhere as Vision appears.
Sorry, not sorry. But Tony would so have extended Peter's grounding.

"You are a kid! You're my kid!" NO MY HEART

This was so great. I love how protective Tony is over Peter and it doesn't feel forced. Really good story line.

Awww damn it you've done it again! Amazingg story (albeat a little tear jerking)!

Love..love these stories.

I totally understand both Tony and Peter. Even though he was grounded Peter couldn't let those kids die when he had the ability to save them. He would never have forgiven himself if he'd found out anybody died. But Tony views him as his kid, and of course he'd have been terrified, especially when Peter died in his arms. Excellent job!

This was so good! When you replied to my comment on your last story and said that you had more Dad!Tony angst coming I was really hoping it would be soon and I was not disappointedyou're an awesome writer and so good at capturing the characters. Not very many writers can have Tony Stark cry and have it be believable, but you accomplished it. Hope there's more stories in the works!

Oh my oh my oh my!
I checked your profile today thinking maybe you'll update tonight or maybe tomorrow but the story was already up!
Second of all you made cry with you calling me a wonderful friend TwT
And yes! I didnt like it, I LOVE IT 3 (if putting emoticons was an option here on FF i would fill this page full of em 3 )

Ok now onto my more detailed review!
First off I loved how frustrated Peter gets xD and I liked the fact that Ned shows his worry for Peter as well 3 but poor Peter that he's all by himslef thinking the grounding is unfair
And when Tony calls him at school and says he's goingto be late and to hurry up was hystericallll! Oh my god xD i laughed sooo hard xD
Then I loved the image of him doing his homework upside down he looks so cute like that :D
And I love Karen on this xD and I love the fact that she also tells him he shouldnt be wearing the suit but she's such a sweetheart for helping him out locating the kids 3
And Tony's first recorded message MADE CRACK UP like he TOTALLY knew Peter would break the rules xD

Then in the fire I was like SO WORRIED FOR PETER OMG OMG GMG
I loved how you build the suspense up! I made the scene up in my mind and It was like perfect!
But when the building collapsed on Peter it stung my heart T.T and then Tony reaching him and getting him out was soo painful D:
And then Peter being in such pain and not being well wants me want to hug him TT
And the part where Tony and Peter are kind of arguing and then Tony drops the bomb about him dying!
I WAS NOT EXPECTING THAT AT ALL! DAMN IT WAS SO GOOD.
I cant imagine how bad Tony felt!
And not being able to help him till he got the tower was just WOW! Breathtaking!
And thanks for putting my lovely Bruce in there again!
It's beautiful 3
Again I want to thank u again for writing this in such an accurate and spectacular way 3 I loved it loved it loved it.

I have my doubts Peter will sty in bed, he has such a strong hero complex and this proves it.

Invader Johnny Signing Off.

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