This was a hell of a read. My interest in the Harry/Draco pairing is limited at best, because it's usually so poorly written, but there are noticeable exceptions. You are one of them. Without actually changing anything established in the series, you've managed to bring it into the realm of believable. Well done.

Wow! I wasn’t expecting that! It is an interesting story and very emotional; emotional from the fact it is set on the characters emotions. It seemed really well written to me: storyline was interesting, good characterisation and grammar seemed good.
Thank you for writing it and have a nice day.

holy crap. that last line is adorable, and whil i normally dont like draco and harry together, you did it amazing! the recap of all four years, and what he did to gain harrys friendship, or to warn him was so elementary school cute! you did a wonderful job, and i really do hope draco earned harrys love in the end! :D

I liked this a lot. Looking forward to the update!

Nice.

Excellent, and hilarious fic darling, and that final line cracked me up, because I thought it was very true to character while still also redeeming him. I do this draco is a desperate pathetic boy that wants attention, and the twist you added to it was both sad, funny, and interesting

This...is really good. Without shifting from canon, you have made the whole story so realistic, so believable.
Draco's character, I feel, was well developed. It was fun to see things from his perspective, especially when he was trying to get the Savior's attention.
The last line, I guess, summarizes every teen's reaction when they realize they are in love!

All in all, amazing story!

This is excellent.

YES! I love this so much! :3
-Ana

Wow, I can't believe how in character and realistic this is! And when I say "I can't believe," it's not because of you (because you are one of the writers I admire on here and the only reason why I'm reading a Drarry :p), but it's just an "unbelievable" that means, "this could totally be canon!" Yet, it's not boring at all, because I found myself pretty intrigued by Draco's thought and while reading, I kept thinking, "I can't wait to discover what Emy did with ..." And I know Rowling wrote books, but the movies have become canon too, and I swear I could hear Draco (well, Tom Felton, but still)'s voice speak those lines most of the time! And really, the whole story flowed so smoothly! Great job!

I'm normally not a fan of Drarry, but *dang* this was awesome!

You did an excellent job of using the headcanon; it didn't feel forced. Both Harry and Draco's characterizations felt genuine and realistic. I also loved that you didn't really change anything from canon. Everything happened as it did in the books — just with deeper motivations (which was the headcanon, anyway ... I'm just impressed because I think it would have been easy to change a lot of things, but you didn't).

The pacing was well done, as well. The switches between present day fourth year and first year felt natural. The story was well-written and I didn't notice any SPaG errors. Really, really great job! :D