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lemondrizzlecake chapter 171 . 4/9 Nice little chapter! It's almost weird to not be on vacation anymore, lol, it feels like it's been so long. But it was time to get back to "real" life. I loved The Fresme part, I think you conveyed really well how Frankie feels a bit guilty now and doesn't know how to handle the situation. And you had me on the edge of my seat throughout the Lola part with her mum! I was as confused as Lola at the beginning, then dread filled me when I realised what it was about, and then... you just handled it amazingly? Ot really shows how far these two have come. Well done! |
Guest chapter 171 . 4/6 Cute 3 pls follow Fresme to the gelato shop I need to know which toppings they would use desperately ~kier |
NotoriousReign chapter 171 . 4/6 Well, this was a really sweet chapter. Always here for the Legacies reference, I have a feeling that's for me too so aww. I like how much Lola's relationship has developed with her mom, it's really well-written. Great job, can't wait for more! |
LadyMalfoyNimbus2000 chapter 118 . 3/24 This story is amazing. I can’t put it better than that. I love it! |
Silver chapter 170 . 3/23 Miles how’s to puke.. Silver energy. He invented anxiety I believe . This chapter was so cute the stress teleported me back to reading her telling Miles about Hope two years ago and that’s the nostalgic energy we love! Anyways I feel like if anybody has bad luck to get pregnant despite how careful they are...It really would be these two idiots |
degrassian98 chapter 170 . 3/22 Such a cute chapter, I love them so much. 3 |
lemondrizzlecake chapter 170 . 3/15 Oh dear heaven THANK YOU, Lola is not pregnant. Ugh, the relief I feel, it's as if it was me taking that pregnancy test. So nice to have you back, I really missed this story! Miles freaking out on Lola was such a mood, but their talk afterwards? I love how you write these two together, seriously. And the callback to the first time round felt right, reminding us how things have changed for them. Also, yes for Lola thinking about university! As adorable as Hope is we don't want Lola to waste her potential being a teenage housewife. Great chapter, good to have you back! Speak soon |
NotoriousReign chapter 170 . 3/15 Oooh I was a little on the edge of my seat here! I wonder why she was sick though. And I'm here for the fact that you still incorporated abortion for them. |
Guest chapter 169 . 2/27 Still really enjoying this story and hoping for an update soon! |
Jello chapter 169 . 2/26 Hope everything is well with you! I’ve caught up with this story and now I’m on my tippy toes waiting to see the plot twist with Lola! It was nice seeing Frankie trying to get Lola to be rational because most of the time, it’s the other way around! Also, I like that Hunter was finally able to open up to Miles! Can’t wait for the next update ! |
KEEP WRITING chapter 88 . 2/24 The last sentence though! lol Also I have just wrote a draft of a storyline based off of Jenna and Connor write me back! . |
Guest chapter 118 . 2/19 Frankie is so immature |
NotoriousReign chapter 169 . 1/13 Hunter and Miles bonding was so sweet, I loved his advice too because it's so true. There's more to being with someone than just putting up with them. He's becoming so smart! And now I'm waiting on baited breath to see how it goes with Lola and Frankie! |
lemondrizzlecake chapter 169 . 1/13 New chapter? Yes! Oh wow, Lola freaking out was quite on point. Nice to see Frankie being the mature one in the relationship for once, she is quite nurturing when she’s not a mess, and you captured it nicely here. Please tell me Lo’s not pregnant? Ahh, the pains! Since you know me I don’t have to tell you how much I absolutely LOVED the Hollingsbros scene. Miles going all protective on Hunter (while still teasing him for his first hungover, eheh) is such a mood. Loved the update, can’t wait for more! |
ScriptsByJames chapter 167 . 1/8 Okay there’s a ton to like here, especially the Mola intimacy, but Frankie being a mess and accidentally waking up Hope was the highlight for me! Love the way you write them in a totally different world and tone, but in a way that’s still so them. |