MOREEEEEEEEEEEEE PLEASEEEEE

no but jonerys

i love jonerys

whyyyyyyyYYYYYYY

Very good characterization. A few typos, missed commas, and possessives, but overall good!

Pffft, trust game of thrones to create a world where you gag at incest, then start rooting for it haha. Gaaaawd, it hurts to see these two pulling apart, but again very in-character and perhaps gives them something else to work around

This is incredible! God my heart is still beating, the pacing and characterization seems like a transcript from the show! Well done to this amazing work, I'm simultaneously surprised by everyone's reactions and also completely accepting of it being in their character- just like any scene in GOT!

Hey I am glad you decided to write more.
Love all the angst in this chapter.
I do hope you write more. As much as I love angst I need a sort of happy ending.

This ended way to angsty for me to enjoy. I want to bitch slap Jon through my monitor and yell at him for not going after her. I'm hoping to see a chapter 3 that can help me feel better. :(

Other than that it's well written. I wouldn't feel so bad if it wasn't. Please continue.

This made me so sad :( I wish it wasn't the end and that you have more, but it really seems like the end. I like your take on this, I loved Sam's awkward flustering when attempting to tell Jon of his parentage. I loved your writing!

I love reading what other author's think Jon and Dany might react to the news. I've read so many interpretations where Bran and Sam just announce it to everyone, but I definitely see it more fitting for Sam to at least respect Jon enough to inform him first and foremost in private. I hope that when it actually happens, Dany will be more receptive. She has been the only Targaryen in the world for so long, I feel like knowing that another blood of her blood exists, would at least make her feel more relieved. I remember reading that for so long, she was alone, and a Targaryen alone in the world is such a terrible thing.

I'm really glad you decided to write more, this is very good and I can't wait to see where this is going between those two!

Well! Now you have to write the last chapter ehere althouhg they fight to be apart they cant!

a next chapter will be so great...

Now that there is a second chapter, don't you want to write a third?
It's great and you can't stop now.
NessL

Oh my God, this is so perfect. the two chapters made me cry, do not stop the story. It's so beautiful and perfect.

Fun history, aemon was already a maester when they asked him to become king, he declined, and afterwards joined the nights watch to prevent anyone from trying to use him over his little brother. He joined the same time as former hand of the king, Bloodraven, and was personally escorted there by ser Duncan the tall.

Boy this has gotta sting for them both. What next, turns out Dany really did get pregnant?