What a mess. Good on ya for trying to mix what you did tho

Sadly this story is too far in for anyway to try to pick it up. There is too much stuff in this that anyone but the original creators can’t grow on. The story is too good at this point for anyone to just pick up where the authors left on without extremely detailed notes on where the story was going. So the chances of anyone picking this up is unlikely.

Oh shit something that even Saitama can't beat?

No this story inspired me to write now it's gone.

I like this story a crazy amount. The idea is simply fascinating and your execution is phenomenal for the most part. What follows is not intended as flames or insults, but as constructive criticism. Take it as you will, if you do at all.

Despite how much I like this, however, at least in my opinion, you're jamming too much into too small a space. This is a recent issue and until the last few chapters your pacing was exceptional. What I mean to say is that there is too much happening one after another, consecutively; that it's kind of difficult and annoying to follow. You also seem to rely more on bits than actual humour - for example, how Tatsumaki throws Izuku out of a window repeatedly. Maybe if it was more drawn out and the flow diverged on less tangents, I'd enjoy it more.

I feel like I should point out as evidence for my point that this is my third or fourth read through, and I almost always end up dropping it around the time he first meets Shirone. I've really struggled to push myself to continue reading to this point, which doesn't say good things since the prior chapters were such an enjoyable read.

You meant "number of words", not number of pages! Great job on the story! Can't wait to read the rest!

Just the part with Zelretch and inko
Is that a JoJo reference

I do not understand why Izuku does not care about his own life. Shirou was broken by the fire and being saved by his dad guided him on his path. Izuku never had any of that so he should not be that stupid. Especially when he is actually really smart.

Damn You Zelretch... A phrase that is in every Fate Fanfic...

It was pretty enjoyable. Though I didn't like how it was just crossover after crossover after crossover. Sad that it's discontinued but hoping someone takes the idea and executes it better since I sure as hell can't.

it's a mess fanfic too much crossover and not properly executed

I'm very sad that you discontinued this story.
This is one of my favourite story.
Good luck for your other stories

I loved this story, why did you discontinue it. Well good luck with your other stories.

Why are you abandoning this one?! I've been waiting for the update for so long and now I see that it's discontinued! Why?

I was really interested in the story but I can't stand this story villain thing and all this stupid mysterious plot