I loved the new chapter!

The ending really tugged at the heart strings. I can't wait until the next chapter, though I understand the loss of motivation. And just life getting in the way! I hope you're not to over worked!

I'm very glad I stumbled on your story! I just spent a few hours bing reading it! I hope there's more to come!

In reality I don’t think kakashi would pity Sakura, I feel like he would hate himself and find a way to blame himself like “I should’ve started training sooner” or “I shouldn’t have accepted the mission” seeing as how he could sympathize with how he killed Rin because she had a biju forced in her. At the very least he would sympathize but definitely not pity.

Wow. This was a great chapter. Naruto finally knows who his parents are! I got goosebumps thinking of how important this scroll must be. Imagine this got to the wrong hands… And they just read it. Tsunade must be either desperate or shes just too optimistic to think this information will get safely delivered to another country. I hope the Kazekage is Gaara, I really hope so. Its going to be a mind-blowing day for Naruto. Well for all of them. Its great to see them on a mission together. And Nice cliffhanger there. HAHA.
I really like those random Shino scenes. You portray him so good; I like it. Scenes with him are so funny. And Sakura and Ino got their summoning animals! Yes, really convenient xD And their names. Oh god. HAHAHA. Im glad Hinata finally woke up! Its cute how fast the news spread over Konoha. It feels like shes Konohas princess or something. Well she kind of is, I guess. Haha. I really do wonder how Sasuke is doing all this time. It feels like we havent heard from him for a long time. And Grey Sakura… Urgh. I thought those nightmares would end but they just got worse. Poor Sakura. Its not like she didnt have enough already to deal with.
Thanks for these chapters! I finally caught up to all of them!

Poor Kokuo… I do understand why Sakura reacted this harsh but aww… I feel for Kokuo. A whole week not talking to each other is really sad. At least they made up now. I do wonder how Inner turned out this power-hungry. Since shes Sakuras Inner, it does implicate that Sakura is wishing for more power..? Scary how she could have turned that way.
Team 7 signature jutsu… It does sound cool. It would be awesome if they all learnt the Chidori, yup definitely.
And then there is Orochimarus deal with those mysterious guys… Im not sure if those are from the same group as the one in the previous chapter? Those who wanted to… use the gobis jinchuriki? They seem… really dark. I hope they wont succeed in capturing Sasuke AND destroying Konoha. UGH. They just managed to retrieve Sasuke!
Thanks for these chapters! I can feel these fillers are important for the final arc!

What. The. Hell. Im speechless, I definitely didnt think it would end like this. Was that the grey thingy Sakura kept seeing in her nightmares? Where did she come from? How did Inner turn out this dark and powerful? I cant imagine dark Inner being this powerful, she even beat Sasuke and Naruto in their most powerful state (as of yet)! I have sooo many questions!
Well, at least Sasuke wasnt able to leave Konoha (yet?) I really hope he doesnt leave! I can feel its getting even more chaotic!
Sakuras fight scene with Kimimaro was awesome! That was my favorite fight scene in the Sasuke retrieval mission. I also liked how Lee entered the scene, that was really cute! ARGH!
On another note, I wanted to say how touched I was by Neji and Hinatas action. Not long ago Neji really hated her and now he changed and really cares about Hinata. Im so happy!
Thanks for these great chapters! You really improved a lot in one year.

It’s been a looong time since my last review! Almost a year! :0 SO SORRY! Anyway, SASUKE’S RETRIEVAL MISSION! arghhh! How anxiously I was waiting for it (not) to happen... And now, finally!
I’m so glad the girls are on this important mission as well. This mission is like the center piece for those boys to bond as a team... And I always wished for Sakura to be part of it too! Thank you for making that happen!
The group seperation was awesome! I’m amazed at how perfectly each one of them fit & all of them has an important role! I’m actually hoping for them to succeed with their mission... Really!Desperately! Praying! But the chance for that to happen is small, I know.
I tend to forget how little screen time girls get in Naruto, but whenever I read your stories, it pops up in my mind once again and then I always get frustrated with canon-Naruto... That’s why I’m so glad stories like yours exist!
Thanks for this awesome chapter! I’ll write soon again!

as long as hinata does not hook up w/ naruto i think i'd be happy with anything. the only time i kinda like naru/hina is in a harem fic where she's not the only girl with him. there's Fu, Karin, Ino, Tenten, none of whom are attached at all. bringing either or both karin & fu into the story is always interesting. try not to build sakura up too fast it's a little ridiculous that she can use all 5 elemental releases. also naruto needs some growth too he won't stay an idiot child forever he does grow not only in power but as a person. also unlike suna the leaf would not let sakura run around w/ a weak seal they'd have strengthened it right away.
also how about having inner hook up w/ sasuke?

2 years? that's super lenient i would expect he'd be locked up for a decade or life. defection or treason is a big deal. sasuke's actions led to the near death of the heirs of 2 major clans the hyuuga alone wouldn't stand for such a light sentence. then there's kiba's injury he's the son of the head of his clan & then the injuries to naruto & sakura directly caused by him no way is 2 years enough. contrary to popular fanfiction belief they'd lived w/out the sharingan for several years & had little trust for his clan before. should they have recovered him they'd have no trust in him at all the elders can be quite severe & tsunade herself being orochimaru's teammate wouldn't allow for leniency.

i always think it'd be better for naruto or sakura in this case both of them to give jirobo some biju chakra to suck on since he's absorbing their chakra.

Why are slugs not Katsuyu

only 5 ppl in the world are kage every other village just has a head jonin or some other head position.

team 7 don't get along well but naruto & sasuke mesh really well in fights. so they've got teamwork when they need it.

sakura would have no right to say anything to naruto b/c she's not told him about kokuo. she's only just beginning to see what he's dealt w/ his entire life.

okay sakura only recently becoming a jinchuriki & now learning 4 elemental releases is absurd. naruto could learn but he's been one for years he's had time for his chakra to grow to stupendous levels. sakura's been one for what a few months? also she's gonna want to hide her forehead b/c of the 5 horns that would appear on it just like w/ Han.