It was great fanfic Can you continue and do the next part maybe when Honoka is a bit older?

keep this up!I'd like to see what's to see what's going to happen next.
Also, please add some KotoU

Premise what I want, obvious fantasy stuff. Need to fix characterisation, but the plot flows. So, hey ho! this good actually

it so cute love it

UR FANFIC IS CRAP GO HANG URSELF AND CRY TO YOUR MOM U FAG PPL LIKE U R THE REASON WHY EUROPE'S DYING U FILTHY WEEEB GO HOME AND RIDE UP AND DOWN ON YOUR DADDY'S DICK FUCK YOU I HOPE U GET GNORHOEAA FROM UR MOM U SICK PEDOPHILE LICK MY CUNT AND SUCK MY COCK BEFORE YOU CREATE SUCH A STORY NEXT TIME FAG

UR FANFIC IS CRAP GO DIE YOUR MOM XDDDDDDD

When I was a kid, I saw my grandpa die of cancer.
He was a habitual smoker and smoked about 2 packs each day.
On his funeral, my mom made me vow that I shall never smoke bor follow my grandpa's to death.
However, now I realised that I have commited a big mistake and shouldn't have listened to her for your fanfic gave me canver.

Aww ! that was cute and you story is very interesting .
can't wait for the next update of your story.
I was wondering if there will be a KotoUmi in this fic?

Oh my gawd

I cant take it anymore. its so gaddamn cute!

This is cute and genius! Keep it up. :)

Lol at the part that Honoka say she wants Booby milk XD. I love this story so far!