Reviews for Apparition
KitKatLovesUT chapter 10 . 11/1/2017
omg. that was so amazing!
Atsukko chapter 10 . 10/12/2017
I dont understand anymore. Dipper, Martín, pacífica, Pacífica 30, Mabel..ufff...
William Easley chapter 1 . 9/25/2017
To answer some questions:
1. I wonder what effect Chazz had that saved Dipper. Hmm.
*Not Chazz so much as his eventual children-which he didn't have first time around because he died without marrying.

2. I am confused about a couple of things: first, I thought Time Baby, Blendin, and the older twin(s) tricked Bill. Am I missing something or did they somehow trade moments in history because of these unorthodox time-alterations?
*Yes, with Dipper's and Mabel's help, in my normal continuity, they did trick Bill into thinking Time Baby had been vaporized when he had not; in time line B, though, Blandin didn't think of asking Dipper and Mabel for help, so Time Baby was vaporized and it will take 1000 years for him to regenerate.

3. Second, how much do Dipper and Mabel recall about this adventure. I know the details are familiar at best, right now. But do they even know that they just had an adventure? And does Dipper still have Mr. Electrician's little gift? If he doesn't remember now, something tells me that that might not last. Plus, do erased memories ever truly stick? :)
*They can't recall very much. Because of the time reset that Blendin pulled off (very tricky and dangerous to do, but he managed it), in effect the events of Angelique's death in a car-train crash and what followed didn't happen. However, because the dress had been brought into our time line, a ghostly echo of Angelique remained and couldn't be sent away until it attended a dance. Dipper helped there. Oh, I think Mr. Electrician's gift was used up in chapter 9, when Dipper diverted Butch's car.

Thanks for the review!
-Bill
DinoGuy2000 chapter 10 . 9/25/2017
Ah, no serious injuries. Good. And everything turned out well! Simply splendid!

Good work!
DinoGuy2000 chapter 9 . 9/25/2017
Whoo! Nice chase, and we finally see what Mr. Electrician gave Dipper. Very neat.

I wonder if anyone was seriously hurt. That was really close, after all. Well, I'll know in a minute. Onward to chapter 10!

Good work!
Ghost Man chapter 10 . 9/24/2017
I was hoping all of Dipper's experiences and little bit of Bill AND being one BMF Sprinter would give him the reflexes to put that guy in the dirt...well KO not dead. It was one of those things that was easy to see coming. Hmm...*smirks* Bill ol' man, didn't know you had a bit of Dipac in ya or whateveer the fans call it. I guess I could see that, but I see what you meant by Time Echo. You really love the bitter sweets, don't you. *claps* Well played.
Ghost Man chapter 9 . 9/24/2017
Woooo! Chaos theory shoves simplistic systems out the window! Please be okay please be okay!
Ghost Man chapter 8 . 9/24/2017
No no on! It's a trap, Angelique! It's a trap! You don't know what horrendous stuff awaits ya! *shivers in anticipation*
ficthow chapter 10 . 9/23/2017
Wow great story. I reread the last part twice, and realized that since their memory of the previous events was so-so, they couldn't tell that Dipper's dancing partner was in fact Angelique. Great touch. For some reason I want to see Dipper dance more in your future stories.
AllenbysEyes chapter 2 . 9/23/2017
This is some of your best work, man! I love the way you're juggling multiple timelines, character arcs and historical settings without losing sight of the story. And as I said before, I like all the nods to Ray Bradbury. Great job!
Crimson Reiter chapter 10 . 9/23/2017
Your use, and management, of Time Travel is just perfect.

Kudos!
Guest chapter 10 . 9/23/2017
OH, something I forgot to ask: how many timelines have we seen so far: three? Four? More?
Again, looking forward to the next story.
Guest chapter 10 . 9/23/2017
Well, this was an excellent story. I guess the time-travelers weren't kidding when they said there would be a lot ripples and whatnot.
And it's nice to see Pacifica got a happy ending in at least one timeline.
I guess Angelique really appreciated what those two did. Gotta wonder how she got there. Oh well... Another mystery for another day.
I wonder what effect Chazz had that saved Dipper. Hmm.
I am confused about a couple of things: first, I thought Time Baby, Blendin, and the older twin(s) tricked Bill. Am I missing something or did they somehow trade moments in history because of these unorthodox time-alterations?
Second, how much do Dipper and Mabel recall about this adventure. I know the details are familiar at best, right now. But do they even know that they just had an adventure? And does Dipper still have Mr. Electrician's little gift? If he doesn't remember now, something tells me that that might not last. Plus, do erased memories ever truly stick? :)
I can't wait for your next story.
fereality chapter 10 . 9/23/2017
Another great story.
I love the whole traveling to the past to save the original owner of the dress story, Mabel being a member of the Time Anomaly Clean Up crew, and the fact that secretly it's all to save Dipper. But to have him marry Pacifica, that's some Northwest Mansion Mystery Nior level bs there. I mean you have been building up an awesome Wendip universe and mow suddenly he's marrying Pacifica, who we last saw having moved on from her crush and dating someone else. My first thought when we saw Adult Pacifica was where's Wendy. Nearly every part that AP had better fit Wendy, even more so due to the connection between her and Dipper. His death would definitely send her to finding a way to save his life.
Again this was overall an excellent story. But again what the hell, it's also such an overwhelming and abrupt departure from where your story's focus has been that it really doesn't sit well with me sorry. I feel like it should be an au along the lines of your baseball au.
Keep up the good work and have fun writing.
Guest chapter 9 . 9/23/2017
Great chapter. I've got just one thing to say: intense (in a good way)!
Onto the next one.
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