Omg! I love it! Seriously!
Never expected this pair!
Ahaha!
Can I actually make a requesy too, can we have an incest between Gohan x Goku! Hihi!

This was absolutely beautiful. It felt very natural, and very believable - you kept everyone in character very well. I... am usually much, much more verbose than this, but I can't find the words for some reason, I just want to sit here quietly and smile. Yamcha is obviously very happy and content at the end of this story - and at the end of it and right now, that's how I feel to. Again, beautiful. You've obviously got a gift for writing.

I love this story so much! I was in a really bad mood before this and now I'm grinning like an idiot! It was awesome!

I felt so many emotions when i read this story that i didnt want it to end. The way you brought those two together was beautiful. I wish there were more stories that can bring out your feelings like this one.

It's been a long time since you've been around. Your talent and your heart are sorely missed, friend. Rock on, where ever you are.

I love Vegeta/Yamcha fics. Please write some more.

-Steps away-Creepy!

Great fic.

I loved it.

Please make more Vegeta/Yamcha fics.

You're right.

There aren't enough Vegeta X Yamcha fic in the world.

So make some more.

This Vegeta/Yamcha fic was awesome.

Make some more Vegeta/Yamcha fic.

And fast.

I thought I wouldn't like it, 'cause I hate fics when a character die, but I did well in continue reading. That's the best DB fiction I read, I wasn't even looking for Yamcha x Vegeta but came across yours and decided to read. Your story is truly great, like something that actually could happen. It's cliche, but keep up the good work!

Is... ¡BEAUTIFUL! ;_;

YAY! That slut Bulma dies! YAY! Ding dong the witch is gone, witch is gone...ding dong the wicked witch is gone! Hahahahahahahahaha! Finally, someone needed to write a fic about that hoodrat biting the big one. She's nothing but a skanky little whore whose nothing but a ho! She needed to die. I hate that tramp, skank, prostitute, hoodrat, ho, whore, slut! Thank you for killing her. I owe you my gratitude. Thank you!

Wow, fantastic stuff! I love this pairing, and it is beautifully written.

this is damn class! I loved the manner in which the fic was told, very smooth and yet real. You certainly need more reviews!

Naikora

I dun understand why this is R, but whatever. u know, I never ever read anythinh with this pairing. to be honest, the thought of it I found rather disturbing. but somehow, u made it look natural for them to be together, and it worked out nicely. I actually enjoyed reading it. nice, very nice.