Oh please have Batman rescue Dick soon.

Genial

I'm loving this story, the humor, and the chapter s being the words to Imagine Dragons "Monster".

Seriously? Huh, your writing was pretty damn good for a 13 year old... I had you pegged as being somewhat older. Kudos to you. Glad to see you back in action.

Very good. Need more! Please.

Awesome more smartass jason and dick

Why does he keep getting taken down so easily?

This is amazing! Please continue it when you have time and inspiration. Best Talon Dick story I’ve read, my favorite too. Keep up the good work and God bless.

Thanks for another chapter.

This is a really fun story.

I agree with a few other people here: The pacing is still pretty fast, and it impacts the emotion of your writing a bit. Nonetheless, I think you have some really good, creative ideas, and you seem to be balancing the characters really well.

How're you going to continue, though? The reemergence of the Talon and Cobb seems like the climax of the story. (All other loose ends have been wrapped up for the most part.) So, I'm curious if this story is going to be wrapped up in the next few chapters...? *shruggle*

Hope to see more from you soon!

O.O Oh man. I like how Dick's Talon life has come back to haunt him in a way.

Huh. I would maybe reread this for a few typos. (I think some slipped by since you mentioned you rewrote this chapter in a day.) I like that Amy's in this! She was a really cool character in the comics, and I'm excited to see what you do with her.

That ending threat by Alfred is very, very scary.

I thought it was interesting how you picked Jason to be the person Dick would gravitate toward. Both have killed people, so they can understand each other in that way-a way the rest of the Batfamily can't understand. It was really well-done.

Aww that was so awesome I grinned through the entire chapter and still am writing this. Jay's entrance was perfect and I loved his little comments. It was so cool having him involved in this along with Amy trying to figure the two birds out. The cavalry coming in was epic, right when they were needed and Amy is right there with them. Dami's line was just the icing on the cake. This week for me has been pretty sucky so thank you for an update and an awesome chapter.