really good work but the gun names are wrong its cattlemen revolver and carbine or Lancaster repeater great work very cool oc

I'll miss this. :P

Brilliant story so far. Love that fact that you've took some inspiration from Cowboys & Aliens during the first chapter too.

This is awesome! More please!

I really like this so far, only thing is it isn’t that obvious how much time has passed, other than you saying a few weeks ago or a month ago, there’s not much more beyond that so the pacing kinda feels wierd.

I haven't read any Red Dead Redemption fanfics before I found this one, and I am definitely intrigued. I hope you will continue this.

I love the way you write action :)

Why do I get the feeling he was part of one of the gangs?

I like it a lot

Ahhhhhh, this is so similar to the first chapter of Widowmaker Jones! Now I'm not saying that's a bad thing. I was just so amazed when Court did what he did. Talk about a pleasant turn of events uwu
Oh, and before I forget: I truly admire your grammar and sentence structure, too. Keep up the fantastic work!

Has this guy stolen John's body or is he a replacement character? Kissing Bonnie would probably make John upset, considering what kind of man he is! Liking the story so far, hope you're continuing with it!

I'm loving it and the parring, keep it coming

I'm surprised at how quickly Court and Bonnie admitted their feelings for each other, but I'm okay with that. :3 I'm glad you killed off Herbert, too.

Thank fucking god someone killed Herbert MOOOOOON!

Great story, keep it up and all that good stuff!

This is a really cool concept, I look forward to reading more.