I think this is an excellent story. You did a nice job of keeping my interest flowing from chapter to chapter. It was an unexpected surprise to find out who Tom and Lisa really were...in my mind it was going a different direction.

The climax was good and the final chapter was great. I had almost forgotten about Lorenzo's sax and I'm really glad you added that.

Very well done!

Who could have known that Chris could compose?!

Holy cow!

Mary's very sharp and perceptive.

It's good to see Cap and Frannie back together with Rita and Chris again :)

They struck gold when they ran into Mary

I wish Russell and Christian had a sixth sense about that guy Ling

When that guy first started talking I was thinking not another one but think the circumstances of the guy not knowing where his daughter is are just as heartbreaking

Hopefully his friend can get the information that Chris and Rita need

I'm glad they showed that first one the door so to speak.

Interesting jobs they've investigated. I like that they have good business retainers and don't have to worry about the day to day expenses.

Fun to read a story about Chris and Rita that is set after they left the series. Love the baby's name which came from two special women. It's great to see the two Sams working together.