This story is getting more horrible and horrible with each chapter that it doesn't even deserve to be laughed at. And that's a bad thing with your writing skills that you need to face.

Though you can go to a certain TV world in order to face your hidden and true feelings about your writing abilities.

I like the way you’re taking this story. It’s really a new perspective, I read some stories where there was an attempt at being realistic about the situation the Pokémon world was in, but it always fell flat or it didn’t really stick. You summarily drop kicked the reality into the Pokémon world with such ferocity, I’m surprised there isn’t a tear in space here. It’s so jarring seeing some polite talking, then some screwed up topics just dropped straight after. It felt like watching the first Pokémon movie again, in my adult years, and seeing that they were really screwing with life and subjugating it there after. But multiplied by a thousand, give or take. Those scientists died, it was grim, and there was a human killing, artificially created Pokémon running amok about, in the region. There had to be casualties, not just humans, but the Pokémon used by those humans to fight this bipedal, hairless cat Pokémon so they could use it in a slave fight and get rich. Then abruptly torn asunder from purplish mind powers leaving a puddle of viscera for a Cubone, or a Lickitung to drink or scrape up and devour. Man, you’re story just made me want to punch a bunch of things. And thank you for a really great, well done fic that I sure will check up on occasionally with profound interest. Cool story, bro.

Update soon please

Newtwo sería un perfecto Pokémon que podría ir bien con naruto, Clair y cynthia pueden ser buenas candidatas para estar con naruto.

Newtwo sería un Excelente Pokémon para naruto, ya que el fue experimento de equipo rocket y desprecia los humanos.

Clair o Cynthia

Wow naruto esta que saca todos los trapitos sucios del mundo pokemon y como la sociedad tiene arraigada en las mentes de los más pequeños capturar bestias salvajes en cárceles en forma de esfera.

Please update. This story is so good and I enjoy reading it.

This makes me shiver but i love it

I've read this..can't wait for more.

OH SHIT! OH SHIT!
Dude, Do you really need to turn every fic of yours about a crazy and gritty Naruto? I mean, seriously, Pokemon is light-hearted for the most part. Please preserve that. The professors are diabolical, really?!

good job

looking forward to more! I would love to see Rayquaza in action as his pokemon!

Ok, let's talk about this.

This isn't Naruto at all, this is an OC that you have the arrongance to name and base him off of.

I think this is all that needs to be said in a story where Naruto us nothing more than a character shoved in due to wish fulfillment. If you were actually creative, just using an OC was good enough. You put him into a world because: "FANFICTION, WISH FULFILLMENT, YAYYYYY!"

Imagine what other crossovers can be made with the same method that doesn't involve Naruto. Seriously, this is getting old.

man I can't wait to see Naruto take down the Association

man this is getting crazy now