I feel like yang is honestly a mixture of both
She has express of dom and sum.

Realy dude yang is rapey really i mean really
Yang is not that Kinda of Person at all.
What domantion not enough.

How about Neo breaks Raven and Yang instead? Would work far greater as Yang couldn't really break anyone plus she is highly arrogant and egotistical they are the best kind of people to break after all. Yang is also the biggest problem RWBY has an entire series drags it down to a 7 to a 4.

Raven being the Dom could break Neo but not Yang, Yang lacks the aura of a Dom. Just too submissive even submissive in nature. She comes off as a Dom but when you take away the layers she is totally submissive.

Yang also reads as incredibly rapey so she deserves to be broken.

Good book cant wait for next chapter

(Saibot) another excellent chapter. Seems like this was more ‘action’ packed.

(Enenra) still hot as hell though. Nice job we can’t wait for more

(Enenra) good to see the sex train a rolling. We can’t wait for more to come.

(Saibot) true. Although he’s more excited than I. Nonetheless can’t wait for more

So now Ruby is intending to be the ultimate dom, nice touch. It would be oh so sweet to see her break Summer~

...and then all of Remnant will be her play field

Let there be war!

so...is everyone's roles switched? subs to doms? doms to subs?

I bet that Yang is going to be the top dom at the end of this story.

This is the same version as orignally uploaded FYI. Any chance you could replace it with the revised one on AO3

hey I thought I saw a thing for chapter 8. was it removed or something?

Hypnotism is such a cop out for a victory. Doesn't seem like something an actual Dom would use to win I mean if you are setting them up to lose fair enough but they should come out on the very top. Don't think you have ever done a story with them, so would be a nice surprise. Seems like you are making Summer a bad-ass Dom but the way she goes about it is not bad-ass.

I actually wanted to say more on this topic but forgot what it was. Was worded much better as well. Lost what I was going to write haha.

Don't get me wrong Dom Summer is an awesome idea just not the method you are using for her to Dom.

Tai was a mood killer as well. A warning would have been better.

Dead?

Wow! This is a great series! But I have a little idea/ request. How about Glynda being Jaune’s “mommy” and basically uses him as a living dildo for her and all her friends to enjoy?