This is really good!

It's been year and you haven't posted the next chapter please post soon

I feel like Percy should join her.
-Diana

Good chapter. After you left your reviews on my latest fic I figured I'd see what you've written. And as I don't know anything about the fandoms you've written about aside from Harry Potter, this was the one for me!

Obviously this is a really short one-shot, but I think you've got some talent as a writer. You've got good grammar (which sets you wellabove most fanfic authors), and I think you composed the scenes rather well, using dialogue and character interaction to show what was going on instead of just giving a description.

All in all, I enjoyed reading it. Thanks for writing!

I love this one shot!

this is great! keep it up!

What?

Great job! This was very well written and there weren't any spelling or grammar mistakes that popped out at me. I especially like how you had Hermione and Annabeth meet in a place that was unrelated to both books. However, Annabeth seemed rather quick to reveal her secret, but I suppose it works since this story started in on the middle of the school year. The part that we don't read about is probably what led her to trust Hermione. And for your question at the end, I'm torn between the two. I really like Percy as a character and I think that you could write him in well in a way that would make sense for the story. But I also think that sending Annabeth alone would be good for her character development because we are focusing on her, and not Percy. Maybe you could have Percy show up sometime while she is at Hogwarts? I don't know, it's your story and I'm really excited to see where you go with it.