Awesome I hope you continue

Cool redo of your old work though im curious if neo is still in Naruto's harem like in the original version of this fic

Wat da fuk?
this is an OC Dominic Grave. this isn't Naruto.

you changed his name. Gave him a fuckton of abilities and then

WHAM! He uses...

Pistols? Again I will iterate: What The Fuck?

this isn't even a flame because you actually have a great writing skills but if you wanted to write an OC story leave the Naruto tag out of it and just label it OC. take the first 3 chapters out of the story and start with Dominic getting adopted after his shipwreck. legit this story had alot of potential for those first chapters and I was enjoying it.

then it went to shit(Not even writing ability wise) just the fact that the direction you went made no sense. I could only glance at everything to see if it would be worth continuing but I can't get passed that stupid OC shit.(OC stories aren't even bad when thats what you want to read, but I came here expecting to read about one of my fave characters in one of my fave crossovers and... wham I got Rick Rolled.)

I'll be honest this was the harshest review I've ever done and normally I give compliments but I just can't for this because admitably I'm triggered here because I feel like I'vr been bait and switched.

have a great dayI'll be blocking ya so that I don't see your stuff ever again.

Awesome chapter keep it up

that was a good chapter, it was nice to see how much Raven worries about naruto and is afraid to lose him .. I'm also excited about talking to oz and raven summer at the end .. I'm happy to read more, thanks for the latest chapter.

That was a good chapter, I hope to see you raven again soon. I am glad that the story continues. I'm happy to read more.

I'm glad that it continues to be so good face .. I hope we see how naruto x raven come together .. I'll read the whole story again is already a long time where I've read it .. looking forward to read more hope soon something will come again.

Stop with the 'kit' shit, it's annoying and cringy. Besides, Kurama has never even said it before!

The hell happened to Tsunade there? That was like a complete 180 switch o.O

Why do you make him change his name? Sure name i can understand because he is adopted to Grave families.. But you change his whole name to dominic? Why not just put OC instead of doing it.. Its confusing yo switch from Naruto to Dominic

Eventually, Naruto is going to free them from captivity thanks to the fact that Aura cuffs DO NOTprevent the usage of Chakra!

Looking forward to the next chapter. Keep up the great work!

What is up with the rewriting the past power!?

Those guys have NO IDEA who they are messing with!

That was cool