i honestly believed tsunade had been the good adult but then that happened so im like:
"Tsunade,when i read this on wattpad i told you to kiss my ass;Now im reading it here and all i can say is:Suck my nonexistent dick"

J'ai apprécié cette balade littéraire merci

I stop reading after sakura came in the office the fuck is this

This shit could've been better. Go suck a dick, you worthless two-dollar bitch.

Absolutely fucking retarded

Just NO. This story fails so much so as a Naruto story. Within 2 chapters it falls apart so very quick. Tech in Naruto world is very odd. You really need to research it a lot but writing it with tech build in.

This is a really great story. Wonderful job!

Olá,

Gostei da história.

Beijos!

Very well done! The best part was No mpreg! Amazingly well done story!

Finding good completed banishment stories can be hard. Im glad to have found yours. You finished it perfectly and people got what they deserved or a chance to be better. Loved this. Write on!

Nī 8zndid nfi di The last time I read this was 2 years ago, I absolutely despise endings because they make me sad, but I love finding a completed story. This story was brilliant, and Ik happy to have been her 1/3 of the way! I hope you are well, If we all live past 2020, then you'll definitely become something great, intact I believe this is the length of a complete book. With luck - Bubble-Chan

a new naruto banished story that has a real ending.
that's great to see. (:

i was really pleasantly surprised by this story. i read it all in one go.
the first few chapters i thought it could gain by taking more its time, expand on a few added chapters but you know what ? the more i was reading the more it become clear you knew exactly where you were going and the story works just fine like that.
i was really impressed with how you neatly tied all the plot points together. like, really. i found myself invested in them without really realizing it so i'm glad haha.
good end too. i didn't see it coming but works perfectly.

all in all it was a really good surprise. and dark-ish, manipulative, overpowered, unrepentant, resentful/hateful/vengeful naruto was always a favorite of mine.

thank you for your hard work and giving this story to us !

Heheh, that was a beautiful wrap up to the story. I especially like how most everyone's life turned out for the better, and how some were even glad as they had basically been forced to become shinobi. Brilliant! And I'd forgotten completely about Orochimaru, glad Iruka could find some joy in it.

Awesome! Taking Gai out with one punch was probably the best advisable course. And I had wondered if Naruto ever got around to talking to Tsunade.