Reviews for Ashen
Ka-tay's mind chapter 1 . 9/9
And here we get answers! I wonder why no one (Hana, Tsume, etc) had wondered if there was any foul play involved in Kaito’s death. The grief, maybe? And reading from his perspective of the hatred he feels from the citizens, oof, it hurts you more when you realise he’s really only just a twenty something year old.
Maelstrom Potter chapter 19 . 8/16
Wow I love this world that you created. Especially Ensui and Kiho. Give us some more Naruto as well would you? Great works as always
firewhiskeyP chapter 19 . 6/11
Really engaging perspectives and stories
rothfyae chapter 18 . 6/10
O.O weird things surround Kaito and Danzo, even odder than I could have thought a few chapters ago. My attention has been captured!
rothfyae chapter 14 . 6/10
Oh damn I did not see that imposter stuff with Kaito and Danzo coming! (But then again how could I have?) Danzo says he’s got mind walk evidence? He seems to truly believe that his student was dead? Is he deluded or is it true? O.o You are very crafty, author-sama, very crafty indeed!
Kaiser Chris chapter 19 . 4/29
Wait a minute, does this mean that Naruto is going to be adopted by Ensui? That would be such an amazing plot point and I really approve of the direction for Ensui and Kiho, but I'm confused because it is never mentioned in the main story outside of Hana seeing Naruto with them and I would think Naruto being raised by her sensei would be a pretty big deal, not to mention the huge political consequences of the Jinchuuriki being raised by a Nara and Yamanaka.
firemaster101 chapter 4 . 3/3
Ya I bawled out as well.
geme1 chapter 19 . 2/29
Que bueno que se quedo con naruto,,... Fue casualidad o algo tramado para que naruto estuviera en buenas manos por mikoto?
UnbiasedBias chapter 19 . 2/29
This is wonderful, and I'm overjoyed that of all the characters, Naruto is who they've adopted (hopefully permanently!). Can't wait to see what kind of impact this makes on the timeline of Bloodless.
Thanks for the lovely update!
geme1 chapter 14 . 2/29
Ver el punto de vista de Danzo me hace preguntar... Que le paso a kaito o que descubrió para cortar lazos con su padre adoptivo? Que le hizo iwa para olvidarlo por completo... Se nota que Danzo lo amaba y eso lo convenció en que era un traidor, porque no le preguntó? Porque no se aseguró de que fuera un traidor? Aún así... Le duele y el único que sabe de su dolor es Hiruzen, es triste como su paranoia lo llevó a este punto, de matar a su hijo... O convencerse de que era un espía... Saludos y aun en tu relato me convenzo que danzo no es un completo monstruo
Ob Inc chapter 14 . 2/29
Holy shit, does this mean he thought Kai was an imposter due to what Ensui did to him? Affter Kai probably murdered his brother/cousin in Iwa. That's almost as tragic as Kakashi's story
Ob Inc chapter 5 . 2/28
This such a great chapter, it might be interesting to see what if the dogs had one too
Mizudoriko chapter 19 . 2/28
An update! Poor Ensui, well, poor everyone really.
neah20 chapter 12 . 2/28
ooooooh i cry for Koma!
100pureawesomness chapter 6 . 2/28
I cried.
why are all of these hurting me?
I'm sad :(
[very well written and I love this! I've read bloodless a lot but I just found this story today {feb 27, 2020} and ahhhhhh. I'm feeling things]
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