| Reviews for Tear |
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   GLACIER3 chapter 1 . 9/3/2017 AWWWWWWWWWN MY fanfiction is bugging so I cant put my name dunno why |
| Windy chapter 1 . 9/2/2017 Poor Zane so tormented with trying to understand how robots react compared to humans. Jay is so heartfelt in this. I absolutely loved it! |
| Tommesterday chapter 1 . 9/2/2017 Great job! This story really put the feeling in it, you should be proud of it. I liked it when you put "dolls of Fate", like the other reviewer said, clever. Please continue writing! |
| Strawberrycheezkake chapter 1 . 9/1/2017 THIS. IS. UH-MAZ-ING! |
| Kairocksrainbow chapter 1 . 9/1/2017 OMG YES! This was Beautiful! I love Pixane so this was great! Emotional but amazing job! |
| heyy.adora chapter 1 . 9/1/2017 Holy cow, this was amazing! And your writing soooooo good! I love how you called the ninja "dolls of Fate" - clever! Aw man, I really would've liked to see something like this in the show. I mean, what we got was fine, but if there was some way where something like this was twisted into it - yeet! And I may not be a fan of Pixane but oh my gosh, you really captured the emotions well here! Great job! |
