I have to stop reading here. I di think that this is way over the top. Ron went to aid Hermione and in return loses pointsthats unfair. And Hermione is not without blame too if I remember correctly from the books, she was condescending very often with Ron.

Plus, it reads like OC and the PS, not HP. Harry doesn’t even feature much.

I certainly did enjoy reading this. The Flynn family certainly will shape the world anew, one way or another. Like Minerva thought it is impossible for a muggle to brew a potion and I was like "Why? why should it be impossible? Not everything needs magic, least of all potion brewing."

And I do thank you for sharing this story with us.

I usually dont read this kind of story, but considering it was in my "fanfiction-to-read-list" and that the summary was intriguing I gave it a try and here i am. Still intrigued and hooked, and wondering what kind of direction this will take.

Les Infantes Terribles. Just from the name alone, I associated the names, David, George and Eli, the Three Snakes of Metal Gear.

From the name, however, I already suspect that Phineas is a Ghost, with a solid form. Why? Because from some Harry Potter stories, Ghosts can't be seen by Muggles, though they can interact with them.

Just a little thing in french "magique" is used to describe something that is magic (magical), when you say that the girls have been gifted with magique it doesn't work, you need to use "magie" which is the word for magic.
That's all thank you for this story (PS:I'm french)

lovely, hope you will update soon xxxxxxxxxxxxx

oh, also, you don't have a single male that is on the side of 'good' in this fic, or a single competent one, judging from dumbledores' inept flailing attempts at manipulation so obvious that they were detectable by Madame pomfrey, somebody he knew the capabilities of, who was loyal enough to him to join the order, and yet didn't have any contingencies, not even a subtle imperius to let him know if it was discovered and then forget about it.

General Adams was similarly incompetent when he required a scientist to remind him of the strategic reasons to not pull out of the wizarding world.

4/5 great fic but with some issues.

You should edit the character tags. Harry was never a main character in this story, and Hermione hasn't really been one since she got potion'd

Also, I can understand why you're getting mad about everybody dissing the plot, but I can also see where they're coming from. from the summary and the character tags, I was expecting a slytherin genetically modified supergenius to team up with daphne, hermione, and Harry to defy albus dumbledore and harness the power of science. Instead I got a bunch of preteen girl interpersonal drama, Harry bashing that wasn't in the description, some cool magic scenes, and a bunch of science wank as well as turning the muggle mother into an op Mary sue who makes all these original discoveries, and is better suited as a geneticist to grow magical plants than professor sprout, and the so-called super-genius geneticist doesn't even consider the possibility of environmental control spells before basically telling her child(ren?) that professor sprout is an idiot for growing plants that prefer different climates in the same greenhouse.

Basically it feels like you're writing everybody except the triplets, their mothers, their friends, and the goblins as mentally deficient. All of the other characters besides aveline, dumbledore, tracy, and Hermione have a fairly similar mean, annoyed, arrogant, and conceited tone.

I like what you're trying to do, but it seems like you're just trying to write an original story, not a hp fanfic. It seemed like there was going to be more harry and interactions with the Canon plot, and then suddenly deus ex machina, the girls and their friends are going to france, even though their mother had just been thinking she wouldn't remove them from Hogwarts as long as the basilisk was dealt with by the end of the year. why even have her think that if she immediately goes against it in the next chapter?

Also I find it completely unbelievable that the triplets and Harry wouldn't become friends at Hogwarts after the coincidence of being neighbors all throughout their childhood, being saved from dudley, and ivy having a crush on him. I also feel like General Adams would have ordered Zoe to get close to him after hearing that he somehow survived an unblockable killing curse and killed the wizard that was conquering everything, mostly with (the threat of) his personal power.

Overall I really like this story and I hope you keep updating, though I admit to hoping they go back to Hogwarts and force Dumbledore to let orianna, tracy, and daphne into Gryffindor for safety. Or perhaps Dumbledore could offer a ridiculous amount of galleons and the Gryffindor deal? that amount of money, untraceable by adams, could help her move against him. I wonder if she could mind control with liquid mana, or use a mind control tune/invisible tattoo

The plotline is fine ish. Not sure I like this chapter meeting god, perhaps meeting death (As in crossing the uncrossable river as the Peverells did) would have been better? As for the characters, I cant say I like any of them. They all seem so retarded. The assumption is that had HP known the truth then he would have acted differently and not like a dunderhead. Here the characters know the truth and act as dunderheads, see what I mean?

500? Yeah, Adams is dead.

I think the origin of magic stuff you came up with is creative, but I've seen similar stuff occasionally.
But calling wizards the Great Mistake? Yeah, that's new. And cool.

Poor Ginny everyone thinks she's the heir to Slytherin. And Hermione is stuck under Dumbledores influence which is sad. The triplets actually going to the French school was unexpected but not disappointing. Looking forward to how you will portray it.

honestly harry potter has a shit ton of bad plotholes that don't make sense at all

So why no reaction on how a 11 year old first year girl gain this kind of power?
I feel that in process of hammering Dumbledore you're sticking the poor girl out in the crossfire over the event. Honesty sad the sisters and there parents don't stop to think what happen to her.
Hope Hermione give them hard hitting information as she would be the one looking after a timid suicidal Ginny.
Though nice to see Tracey got out since she would be up in shit creek after they left.

A shame Hermione is stuck at Hogwarts!

Dear Arcturus:

Tiny thing about the summary: "Evolution" just means "unfolding". That is, it's the name for the fact itself of things - more specifically, events - being driven forward. To say that it is itself what drives things forward is like saying that literature wrote the Iliad.

Sincerely,
Bar Sira