When is it ever going to turn out perfectly normal for the loud kids. Just going based off the title.

Lana better be lucky it wasn't a bear. Otherwise, she wouldn't even be alive.

That's one of the biggest rules of horror: Don't be in denial. Denial death. Guaranteed.

They also don't see the ass-kicking they deserve coming...nor do they realize they deserve it.

Wow that was one intense fight, I'd be interested to know what happening with the other half of the family, maybe a story showing what's happening with them, I would be interested in seeing how Lola is dealing being separated from her twin, maybe the other half learn about the wolf attack somehow and how they react to it, I'm wondering if they had to report the wolf attack to whoever in charge of that campground they were at, I assume they'd need someone to come clean up the stuff and the corpse that was left behind when they rushed to the hospital, you wrote an awesome and suspenseful story and I can't wait to see your next one, good work.

Something mildly comedic would be preferable...especially if there were a cut scene to Toddlers and Tiaras that hinted at why Rita left and how big a jerk Lola is without a moderating influence on her personality. Said influence recently got mauled half to death by a wolf and tends to wear orange a lot.

There are seven better words to use: "I have a bad feeling about this."

Ever heard of the song that says "Murder She Wrote"? Well looks like Taylor is gonna murder the wolf with a knife! Self survival and rescue party is still a factor, Lynn Sr. has to be rescued, Lincoln has to be coma free, the wolf must die

Heh, was that a fourth wall break I spot?

When will Lynn and Taylor kiss? Seriously?

Okay no offense but why would a wolf be attacking them also what happened to its pack.

I have a bad feeling that the wolf isn't the only predator in the forest nor the most dangerous.

Up until you identified what the beast was I thought it was a black bear. Was it the same thing that Lucy saw? Why didn't it attack them then?

Absolutely love the fact that Lana and Taylor are together. Also, I’m glad that their finally gonna be able to tell Lynn and Lincoln about what happened.

So now you realize that Lana’s gone? 10/10 best siblings. Hmmm... where’d Lynn Sr go? Either taken by the beast or he just went to go get something. Lana... MY CHILD... love what you’re doing with her. Having her be lost, really cool. Beavers... dam... !

OH NO

OO LANA, GET AWAY FROM THE BEAVERS. I’VE SEEN THE PICTURE!

But at the same time, stay with the beavers XD

Glad to see Taylor finally got it through his mind that Lynn seriously despises him. Even through the ship is sinking... ;-; Love this series SO