I’m glad that Seth and Olivia talked things out and she is going to stay in Cincinnati. I hope Seth not telling Olivia about talking to Dean and Renee doesn’t bit him in the butt. It looks like these days in Chicago is just what they needed.

Honestly...right now they need time apart. I don’t want it to come to the point where Seth is just exhausted and falls out of love for Olivia. I’m not sure if the ‘Please bring him back’ thought was referring to Seth or her husband but...Liv really needs help, she’s still broken

Poor Olivia all of these memories and she is trying her best to not let them interfere with Seth. I understand how Seth could have gotten his feelings hurt but I hope that he and Olivia are able to enjoy the rest of their trip.

Aww Seth really surprised Olivia and she is enjoying every minute! I hope that she can continue to let the feelings grow and let the memories of Mark and Bean take a back seat for awhile. I’m concerned about her and Renee but I feel they will be ok as time passes.

Those two are just so cute together! They are having so much fun. I just hope when they get back to Cincinnati things with Dean and Renee don’t ruin it

You go Olivia! Don’t let anyone think that they have something with Seth when you are his girlfriend! I love this new side of her, this trip has been the best healing for her! Keep up the good work

Great chapter. I loved the reference to Garfield High in Seattle. I actually know someone who graduated from there.

This trip with Seth is just what Olivia needed to help her heal. I love the interaction between each other and the comfort level. Awesome job!

I’m so glad that Olivia is feeling so comfortable with Seth, he is doing so much to help her heal. I love that she is helping out worn ideas for the gym. Thanks for the updates.

I’m glad that Seth is there for Olivia and I think this trip us exactly what she needed. I hope that with time that she will be able to forgive Dean and Renee.

Happy to see you are continuing the story and look forward to reading about Seth and Olivia’s trip! Can’t wait for the next update!

Baby steps which is good I really think this trip will be good for her

Seth is exactly what Olivia needs right now and I’m looking forward to seeing where their friendship/relationship goes on this trip. I’m glad this story is back, good job!

This story is amazing. I hope you continue it .

awww I love her and Seth! they might be falling fast but they both need it. My heart breaks for Renee I really hope they can all get past this and make up