Honestly, I didn't expect to find this gem.
This is really good, and I hope you will write more of this ship since it's just...great.

So Adorable, our bird headed Edgelord and Frog girl having a moment. I'll admit that's it's a bit of a shame not more could be explored with Tokoyami's little psyche issues in the anime at least. If not a side story in the manga but Understandably can't focuson EVERY character. But good writers/shippers like you make up for that, thank you. Should look up more Tsukoyami sometime in the future.

This whole fic was so cute! As much I love TokoTsuyu with all my heart, my favorite line is:

“God forbid he be like Mineta.”

Idk why but hat line crack me up!

Yes.

While I don't typically view this two as a couple, you did a very good job selling them as such. I'm impressed at how well you nailed these two characters, their dialogue, mannerisims, personalities, etc. Tokoyami and Tsuyu are some of my favorite characters in MHA, so seeing them interact in a really innocent, adorable, and believable manner was very satisfying and intriguing. I really mean it when I say thank you so much for this little short. Getting a bit personal here, but honestly, there are times in college when I feel lonely and depressed, and stories like this provide some much needed levity. So again, I would like to say thanks, and I am looking forward to your other works. This short was well written and your style flows nicely.

(PS: I love the self aware A/N at the end. It genuinely made me laugh because that is EXACTLY what I think of when I picture fanficition writers in my head, myself included XD)

This was fantastic! I love these two, and you write them both so well, please make more 3 3 3

That was cuter than expected. But then again so are these two.

WAS SO GOOD PLSS more of this ship i cant stop reading again

Yay! wish there was more but it's better then nothing

I greatly enjoy this work, another added to my collection of stories to read when I need some entertainment. Now I've yet to read the manga, so I don't know the full story of Dark Shadow going ape-shit, but regardless I do enjoy this piece a lot because it touches on basically the stress and mental fatigue hero life can have, especially when things go as awry as his own power, and considering they are still just teenagers. It's a nice, touching little short, and so I'm happy I was able to find it!

BBBBBBBOOOOOOIIIIIIII! Where was I when this was uploaded! You have slain me with my favorite OTP in MHA...How dare you...but then again I think I needed this...Anyways this is honestly my favorite fanfic about the bird and the frog (though to be fair, there not a lot fanfics with these two, but I'm not saying that the others bad, no non, none)You honestly captured Tokoyami's edgy vocabulary perfectly and I appreciate that someone is able to get that aspect of Tokoyami that I adore, what a mad banquet of darkness indeed. Anyways as for Tsuyu, I feel that you got her personality quite well (although to be honest I am still baffled on how Tsu's personality is set down in paper...*puts head down in shame cause I'm an absoulute tsuyu freak fan*). I hope that this won't be the last of Tsukoyami, cause I think we got a good keeper on this ship if I do say so myself ;}
-The one and only cheesecake that ships a bird and a frog...how the hell did I get here...I don;t know but it's a hell that will enjoy } ;] wink wink

Bless you child! You are doing god's work by making this tsukoyami fanfic..this ship needs more loveeee...ugh this fic is so adorable I can't handle it!